Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Daddy Dances"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from royowen
What a lovely interlude, and an earthbound Nonni, wouldn't it be nice to recreate where Nonni goes to when she's not around Heddy. Such an uplifting post Gretchen, it must have given you a lot of pleasure, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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What a lovely interlude, and an earthbound Nonni, wouldn't it be nice to recreate where Nonni goes to when she's not around Heddy. Such an uplifting post Gretchen, it must have given you a lot of pleasure, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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This was definitely a feel good post. After the last two I thought we needed a break. Thank you for this kind review. Gretchen
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Enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
Nonni seems to be something Heddy needs in her life. Doesn't Heddy wonder why her parents don't see and talk to Nonnie too.
"I've got good new, Heddy (news) Just before the page break.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Nonni seems to be something Heddy needs in her life. Doesn't Heddy wonder why her parents don't see and talk to Nonnie too.
"I've got good new, Heddy (news) Just before the page break.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for catching that. Heddy knows that Nonni only appears to her. Thanks for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a feel-good chapter, Gretchen! I could actually see that black shiny record and imagine them waltzing together with Heddy looking on in delight! Excellent dialogue (I probably don't need to say after this time)! An excellent read with no errors noted. Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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This is such a feel-good chapter, Gretchen! I could actually see that black shiny record and imagine them waltzing together with Heddy looking on in delight! Excellent dialogue (I probably don't need to say after this time)! An excellent read with no errors noted. Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thanks so very much. I could see it too. I'm not normally a romantic writing person but I couldn't resist this one. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well, well, well. Didn't know this was a love story! (smiley face here)
Nicely written.
But I though Mom already knew that Willis was coming home from his letter.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Well, well, well. Didn't know this was a love story! (smiley face here)
Nicely written.
But I though Mom already knew that Willis was coming home from his letter.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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She did know but was unclear when. Now she knows he'll be back within the week. Every now and then I can let the romance roll. Lol. Thanks for this. Gretchen
