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Comment from lyenochka
You always choose the best pictures. I wasn't sure if this was a conversation and the man and woman are talking about each other. I like the balance of the surfer riding the waves and the planet riding the storm.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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You always choose the best pictures. I wasn't sure if this was a conversation and the man and woman are talking about each other. I like the balance of the surfer riding the waves and the planet riding the storm.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. It's from a person point of view. I guess it's okay to think it's two different people... it works too.
Love
MariVal
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Such a beautiful piece of poetry. Passionate and sensual. The artwork as always is on point. I never knew there were so many forms of poetry and I am enjoying learning about them from your poems and the notes you write. Thanks for sharing,
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Such a beautiful piece of poetry. Passionate and sensual. The artwork as always is on point. I never knew there were so many forms of poetry and I am enjoying learning about them from your poems and the notes you write. Thanks for sharing,
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This poem is beautiful. I like most of the words especially where it said, my raging passion. The pictures were so right for the poem. Each picture matched the words. Great job
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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This poem is beautiful. I like most of the words especially where it said, my raging passion. The pictures were so right for the poem. Each picture matched the words. Great job
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda
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Comment from Kari Ann Rouse
What a wonderful objective to attempt. You did well and clearly have much knowledge of Tanka. You definitely enlightened me. I learned from your use of images and story book style.If that makes sense. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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What a wonderful objective to attempt. You did well and clearly have much knowledge of Tanka. You definitely enlightened me. I learned from your use of images and story book style.If that makes sense. Thank you.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Your review is very positive, thank you. I wonder why you gave me a four stars review.... how can I improve...
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I loved the difference in the night and day visions. The woman or Venus compared to the thunder and lightning. Then the excitement of the surfer. The balance on the board, the skimming the surface of the water. Floating across the water. This was such a vivid poem. Kudos to you for this one. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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I loved the difference in the night and day visions. The woman or Venus compared to the thunder and lightning. Then the excitement of the surfer. The balance on the board, the skimming the surface of the water. Floating across the water. This was such a vivid poem. Kudos to you for this one. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Gretchen
Happy weekend
Gypsy
Comment from Douglas Goff
Tanka for this exquisite piece. (Yeah, I went there. I am the funniest man I know!)
Goodness, if Venus looked like that, I would star at her too!
Great piece my friend.
Douglas
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Tanka for this exquisite piece. (Yeah, I went there. I am the funniest man I know!)
Goodness, if Venus looked like that, I would star at her too!
Great piece my friend.
Douglas
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Douglas
Happy weekend
Gypsy