Right in the Eye
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Comment from Wendy G
Yes, they are both now in trouble, and who's going to below his unlikely story? Not a good situation, but at least Mary is safe from abuse. I can't predict what will happen next. I am far from imaginative!
Well written.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Yes, they are both now in trouble, and who's going to below his unlikely story? Not a good situation, but at least Mary is safe from abuse. I can't predict what will happen next. I am far from imaginative!
Well written.
Wendy
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
It's taking a while, but we're tryin' to get to Ben Paul.
Thanks for your continuing interest.
Comment from royowen
An awful lot of questions aimed at Slim there's truly an in-depth line of questioning aimed at Slim, presumably to clear as many anomalies as they can. So beautifully written Wayne. Blessings Roy
Typo : An' (axeray) my head. Exray?
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An awful lot of questions aimed at Slim there's truly an in-depth line of questioning aimed at Slim, presumably to clear as many anomalies as they can. So beautifully written Wayne. Blessings Roy
Typo : An' (axeray) my head. Exray?
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Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Maybe I went overboard, but 'exeray' is a Slim-ism, his pronunciation.
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OK Wayne
