A Sunday Kind Of Love
love soothes30 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Jim, This is a very well written story. I was hoping he and Molly would make things right and start a new life together, but that is just me. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest my friend. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Jim, This is a very well written story. I was hoping he and Molly would make things right and start a new life together, but that is just me. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest my friend. Teri
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
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you are so welcome my friend!
Comment from Neil Samways
A well written and intriguing story that had me captivated from the start. I enjoyed the fast paced but easy to follow story and the tragic ending, was great that they got a bit of time together and a romantic picnic before it all fell apart.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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A well written and intriguing story that had me captivated from the start. I enjoyed the fast paced but easy to follow story and the tragic ending, was great that they got a bit of time together and a romantic picnic before it all fell apart.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I appreciate them very much!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wonderful drama, Jim! At one point (apart from the gender difference), sounding a bit 'Thelma and Louise!' Your characters are excellently portrayed and, in no time, the reader warms to them and wills them on to achieve the great escape. But, sadly, not to be. This is a fine story with excellent dialogue and pace, keeping me enthralled throughout. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Wonderful drama, Jim! At one point (apart from the gender difference), sounding a bit 'Thelma and Louise!' Your characters are excellently portrayed and, in no time, the reader warms to them and wills them on to achieve the great escape. But, sadly, not to be. This is a fine story with excellent dialogue and pace, keeping me enthralled throughout. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I always admire your works.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I wish I had a six left for this post. It's excellent. Yes, we owe our lives to one who was innocent. Great job.
She said, We don't have all that time. We'll skip to Sunday. We'll have a Sunday kind of love." ("We don't)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I wish I had a six left for this post. It's excellent. Yes, we owe our lives to one who was innocent. Great job.
She said, We don't have all that time. We'll skip to Sunday. We'll have a Sunday kind of love." ("We don't)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! They are worth more than stars!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a very interesting idiom I really wonder what the origin of it is I probably should look it up: "I'm in enough trouble now. Don't need to borrow any more. I'm down near Brattleboro Vermont. I hail from north of that called Rutland Vermont. I see what part of Vermont are you referring to. Well ' played This pans out like a movie: "I tried to push my way to the elevator. The tourists all shrieked and gawked, running out of my path."
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This is a very interesting idiom I really wonder what the origin of it is I probably should look it up: "I'm in enough trouble now. Don't need to borrow any more. I'm down near Brattleboro Vermont. I hail from north of that called Rutland Vermont. I see what part of Vermont are you referring to. Well ' played This pans out like a movie: "I tried to push my way to the elevator. The tourists all shrieked and gawked, running out of my path."
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I spent some happy times in Rutland during one of my many college years "road trips!" My friend and I used to stay at a decaying old hotel, the Hotel Bardwell.
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They've made the Bardwell into some kind of like a senior housing now.
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Wow! Someone who actually knows of The Bardwell! I could tell you stories...But I better not!
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gallows laugh... lol fodder for new chapters
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The only cheaper place I ever stayed at was in Philadelphia. It was $7 a night as I recall. I can't tell you about that, either!
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LOL
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Warm smiles back
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Many thanks!
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***Grin***
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I really enjoyed this story Jim and can understand why it didn't have a happy ending. Well written and it moved along well. I'm unsure what the notes mean but, a good read.
Valda
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I really enjoyed this story Jim and can understand why it didn't have a happy ending. Well written and it moved along well. I'm unsure what the notes mean but, a good read.
Valda
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! By the notes, I meant Jesus took my blame and died for me, as the character took someone else's blame.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Jim, this is not only a great story, but a fast moving as well. Two people on the run for a crime they never committed and they're paying the highest price. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Hi Jim, this is not only a great story, but a fast moving as well. Two people on the run for a crime they never committed and they're paying the highest price. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! They mean much to me!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's strange how circumstances can change people, Jim, as in this case. Two people on the run for things they never did. Yet their bond was so strong, they were there for each other. Then everything went pear-shaped. Molly is killed and soon after he was caught and thrown in jail. It was weird when I first started reading your story, my son's name is Phil, and his wife is Molly, niether are murderers or theives, not that I knoiw of, anyway!! Lol.
This was a really good story with lots of twists and turns, and a very sad ending. Well done, I really enjoyed reading it. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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It's strange how circumstances can change people, Jim, as in this case. Two people on the run for things they never did. Yet their bond was so strong, they were there for each other. Then everything went pear-shaped. Molly is killed and soon after he was caught and thrown in jail. It was weird when I first started reading your story, my son's name is Phil, and his wife is Molly, niether are murderers or theives, not that I knoiw of, anyway!! Lol.
This was a really good story with lots of twists and turns, and a very sad ending. Well done, I really enjoyed reading it. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I appreciate all your wonderful works!
Comment from Esther Brown
Jim, I liked the "owe my life to the One who took the blame for me." Two little things...threw her bag over one shoulder (lose the s). And eye needs to be plural. The story was arresting. Rhonda would have loved it. Esther
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Jim, I liked the "owe my life to the One who took the blame for me." Two little things...threw her bag over one shoulder (lose the s). And eye needs to be plural. The story was arresting. Rhonda would have loved it. Esther
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you! I will correct right away! Appreciate you very much!
Comment from tfawcus
Fast moving. Hard hitting. A memorable short story filled with raw emotion. Coincidence makes strange bedfellows and your story shows what a strong bond can form between two people in straightened circumstances.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Fast moving. Hard hitting. A memorable short story filled with raw emotion. Coincidence makes strange bedfellows and your story shows what a strong bond can form between two people in straightened circumstances.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
