Resurrection Flowers
symbolism flora14 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I admired this Easter poem. I might add an apostrophe after "Jesus" to make it possessive, but I understand if you want to leave it as is. It is, of course, your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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I admired this Easter poem. I might add an apostrophe after "Jesus" to make it possessive, but I understand if you want to leave it as is. It is, of course, your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Jessizero, thanks for your nice comments, shared sentiments and
eagle-eye catch of syntax error. Your response is appreciated.
Comment from SimianSavant
**rating revised up after author edit **
Nice visual presentation! Just two things. (And they are actually the same thing):
-since it looks like you are trying to make a 5-7-5 Haiku, the first line only has four syllables
-I think you mean to write "Jesus's prayer". (Or, Jesus' without the extra s is fine too). With this update, your piece will make grammatical sense.
Please shoot me back a message after you edit this and I will bump this up a star.
Thanks for the read, and happy Easter!
SS
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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**rating revised up after author edit **
Nice visual presentation! Just two things. (And they are actually the same thing):
-since it looks like you are trying to make a 5-7-5 Haiku, the first line only has four syllables
-I think you mean to write "Jesus's prayer". (Or, Jesus' without the extra s is fine too). With this update, your piece will make grammatical sense.
Please shoot me back a message after you edit this and I will bump this up a star.
Thanks for the read, and happy Easter!
SS
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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SS, thanks for your eagle-eye catch of syntax error, suggestion and gracious mulligan...I have corrected the possessive error. Your response is appreciated. teafor2
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review updated!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely retelling of the Easter story through lilies. There are several flowers with stories associated with Easter but the lily is probably the most well known. Thank you for sharing. wishing you a blessed Easter. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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A lovely retelling of the Easter story through lilies. There are several flowers with stories associated with Easter but the lily is probably the most well known. Thank you for sharing. wishing you a blessed Easter. Marilyn
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Marilyn, thanks for your shared comments, personal sentiments and
enlightenment of other stories. Your response is appreciated. Ditto
on blessing for Easter. teafor2
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting. I have not heard this story. So the Easter Lily is said to have grown from the sweating of blood in the Garden of Gethsemane? Great job with your Easter 5-7-5.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Interesting. I have not heard this story. So the Easter Lily is said to have grown from the sweating of blood in the Garden of Gethsemane? Great job with your Easter 5-7-5.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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lyenochka, this is one of a few stories that I've read about the origin of this Christian Symbolism. Thanks for your response and generous
rating.