Legacy
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Legacy"Eighth graders learn their place in history
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is very good. I look forward to many more. But I only review people who review me, unless I need points to enter contests.Then I use "read" on the browser and read for points. Otherwise I read one for one and damned the points. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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This is very good. I look forward to many more. But I only review people who review me, unless I need points to enter contests.Then I use "read" on the browser and read for points. Otherwise I read one for one and damned the points. Karen :-)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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I like your attitude! Are you red haired in real life??? *grin*. I'll be sure to check out your work! I will be uploading Chapter 2 in a few days.
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Naturally auburn but Clariol helped me with many different colors. My health interefred with the dying process. So these days I have aspray bottle of 1/3 hydrogen peroxide and 2/3 water. I spray it on once a week. I have shiny beigey red hair these days.:-)
Comment from royowen
What a good idea, delving into our history, nothing really changes all that much, from generation to generation, but I am glad that that I had children, and they had children, because they are good parents and wives, so chances are my grandchildren have a better chance. Beautifully written, well done, great post, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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What a good idea, delving into our history, nothing really changes all that much, from generation to generation, but I am glad that that I had children, and they had children, because they are good parents and wives, so chances are my grandchildren have a better chance. Beautifully written, well done, great post, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. I wrote this on the book in a month challenge, not knowing I was supposed to submit a chapter a day. I may just go ahead and submit it all ... one chapter at a time. History is my passion. Especially TRUTH.
Comment from Gunner Lil
This chapter should be read by every child from 3rd grade to 12th.
A great learning tool.
Outstanding story having this reader wanting more.
Super dialogue that moved the story along.
A few type O's but easy to fix.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This chapter should be read by every child from 3rd grade to 12th.
A great learning tool.
Outstanding story having this reader wanting more.
Super dialogue that moved the story along.
A few type O's but easy to fix.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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There are typos! Yipes!!! I'll have to go back and find them. Thank you so much for your kind words! History is a passion of mine.
Comment from hullabaloo22
What a wonderful chapter! And what a clever teacher, finding the perfect way to get kids involved in their own histories. The use of the photo was an excellent way to illustrate the changes brought by a comparatively short time.
The characters of Brian and his mother were so well done. We also learned quite a bit about Josh and the absent Dad.
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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What a wonderful chapter! And what a clever teacher, finding the perfect way to get kids involved in their own histories. The use of the photo was an excellent way to illustrate the changes brought by a comparatively short time.
The characters of Brian and his mother were so well done. We also learned quite a bit about Josh and the absent Dad.
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much! Much appreciated! I have such a passion for history!
