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Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a well excecuted Lune poem. I like the verses, and the imagery it created if complimented by the photo, that is reaching on tip toes.
Good luck in the Contest.
RJ
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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This is a well excecuted Lune poem. I like the verses, and the imagery it created if complimented by the photo, that is reaching on tip toes.
Good luck in the Contest.
RJ
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, RJ
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome.
Comment from shelley kaye
i zoomed past the stars
in the sky
to land on the moon
a great lune for the contest
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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i zoomed past the stars
in the sky
to land on the moon
a great lune for the contest
good imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, Shelley
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
How easily we overlook the most important aspects of life, and it can happen that later we wonder how we could miss out on so much, and on people who loved us.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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How easily we overlook the most important aspects of life, and it can happen that later we wonder how we could miss out on so much, and on people who loved us.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words, Mark
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is simply beautiful. The words alone would probably get a 6 from me but the presentation is immaculate. I love the fact you have managed to put a picture under the poem. I have no idea how you have done that? 6 stars, you deserve nothing less, although this late in the month...
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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This is simply beautiful. The words alone would probably get a 6 from me but the presentation is immaculate. I love the fact you have managed to put a picture under the poem. I have no idea how you have done that? 6 stars, you deserve nothing less, although this late in the month...
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words, Mark
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent lune poem, I haven't seen one of these for sometime now, and what great theme for this short form work, I like the idea of telling someone they have stars in their eyes, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent lune poem, I haven't seen one of these for sometime now, and what great theme for this short form work, I like the idea of telling someone they have stars in their eyes, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Love the color scheme on this one. Very elegant and nighttime looking. This is very enjoyable as it creates an atmosphere.
Sad that people do lose sight of what they have when looking beyond. The grass is always greener and all that.
Douglas
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Love the color scheme on this one. Very elegant and nighttime looking. This is very enjoyable as it creates an atmosphere.
Sad that people do lose sight of what they have when looking beyond. The grass is always greener and all that.
Douglas
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas
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Comment from patcelaw
Nicely worded and beautifully presented. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with this particular format. I hope you have a very happy Easter and a blessed day. Patricia .
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Nicely worded and beautifully presented. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best with this particular format. I hope you have a very happy Easter and a blessed day. Patricia .
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such a lovely visual and, as ever, beautifully and succinctly complemented with your 13 syllable verse, this time a lune/moon poem. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Such a lovely visual and, as ever, beautifully and succinctly complemented with your 13 syllable verse, this time a lune/moon poem. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. This poem is lovely in its simplicity and very romantic. Nice artwork surrounding it. Well done. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry Contest. This poem is lovely in its simplicity and very romantic. Nice artwork surrounding it. Well done. Good luck.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Marilyn
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Comment from lyenochka
Great "lune" poem which has us "reaching for the moon"! I wonder if this means that we can miss out of the beauty in our loved ones if we are too focused on personal ambitions. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Great "lune" poem which has us "reaching for the moon"! I wonder if this means that we can miss out of the beauty in our loved ones if we are too focused on personal ambitions. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Yes, you right. That's what I meant. Thank you big sister.
Love,
Marival