Ewe Gotta Pick A Reason
100 word flash fiction humor17 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile with your good sense of humour in this one and the last line is magical and had me in stitched Crystie. Good luck with the contest.
Just a couple of suggestions here:
(. . . out for dinner at (a) cozy little Italian restaurant. . .)
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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You made me smile with your good sense of humour in this one and the last line is magical and had me in stitched Crystie. Good luck with the contest.
Just a couple of suggestions here:
(. . . out for dinner at (a) cozy little Italian restaurant. . .)
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your great review and suggestion. I will go back and look at that when I am more alert.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Naming sheep is one thing even if they have amorous relationship but ewe're having them book a cruise and eaten tortellini and such is as obtrusive as Ian's baaackstroke. ð???
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Naming sheep is one thing even if they have amorous relationship but ewe're having them book a cruise and eaten tortellini and such is as obtrusive as Ian's baaackstroke. ð???
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Well, I was just feeling a little sheepish writing this. Thank you for your great comments.
Comment from jmdg1954
Correct. I believe FS counts a hyphenated word as two. Make sure on your count. I'd hate to see you DQ'd over that.
Good work on your 100 word post. You got me in the end with the baaa-ckstroke!
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Correct. I believe FS counts a hyphenated word as two. Make sure on your count. I'd hate to see you DQ'd over that.
Good work on your 100 word post. You got me in the end with the baaa-ckstroke!
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your nice review. This site was adding words even if I added spaces for an indentation.
Comment from lyenochka
LoL. That's quite a story. At least Ian didn't try to pull the wool over Hailey's eyes. Seems like she's a hard one to please to drop one just for his backstroke!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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LoL. That's quite a story. At least Ian didn't try to pull the wool over Hailey's eyes. Seems like she's a hard one to please to drop one just for his backstroke!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your super review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a cute story. Sheep do baa a lot, but perhaps the sheep were tuckered out after being so busy with their prior activities. I wonder if the energetic sheep was getting ready for the relay at the Olympics.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Such a cute story. Sheep do baa a lot, but perhaps the sheep were tuckered out after being so busy with their prior activities. I wonder if the energetic sheep was getting ready for the relay at the Olympics.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind review and comments.
Comment from jessizero
I really enjoyed your 100 word story about the dating relationship of these two sheep. That last line was unexpected and fun. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I really enjoyed your 100 word story about the dating relationship of these two sheep. That last line was unexpected and fun. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your super comments.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a delightful story, and I enjoyed it so very much. You brought a very big smile to my face and a chuckle for my throat. I wished you the very best with the contest. May God bless you. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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This is a delightful story, and I enjoyed it so very much. You brought a very big smile to my face and a chuckle for my throat. I wished you the very best with the contest. May God bless you. Patricia .
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your great comments.
