The Thing about Salt
A little help to preserve my form.16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write with a touch of science here and I enjoyed your wise words for the contest and wish you luck with it, an informative and inventive post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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A poignant write with a touch of science here and I enjoyed your wise words for the contest and wish you luck with it, an informative and inventive post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I am always appreciative of you imparting wisdom an advice when you take time to read my work. Thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. It's thought provoking poem that makes me think about the differences between these two bodies of water. And I love that you can read deeper into it.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I thought this was very creative. It's thought provoking poem that makes me think about the differences between these two bodies of water. And I love that you can read deeper into it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you again for your kind words. I just hope to keep improving. And not waste other time with writings they cannot comprehend. Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this very much! It's simple and yet so profound, comparing lakes to the sea and, in turn, reinforcing the magnificence of the ever constant and flowing ocean. An excellent subject for the contest prompt with a fun and appropriate image to accompany it. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I like this very much! It's simple and yet so profound, comparing lakes to the sea and, in turn, reinforcing the magnificence of the ever constant and flowing ocean. An excellent subject for the contest prompt with a fun and appropriate image to accompany it. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Debbie, thank you so much for your encouraging words. I will try to live up to your beautifully stated sentiments. I am so inspired by your kind words.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A good entry for the Lune Poetry contest. The poem meets the syllable criteria. It is true. Salt completely changes the composition of water. Not only will it not freeze...it inhibits swimmers from entering the ocean immediately after shaving their legs. :-) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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A good entry for the Lune Poetry contest. The poem meets the syllable criteria. It is true. Salt completely changes the composition of water. Not only will it not freeze...it inhibits swimmers from entering the ocean immediately after shaving their legs. :-) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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HaHa:) Thank you so much for your encouragement and review. I hope to get better as I depend on writers like yourself willing to share ideas. Thank you again.
Comment from Mark Jackson
5-3-5 Yes it ticks that box twice I see, now you are showing off. Lakes do stand still when they freeze. Do salt water lakes ever freeze? I would have to ask a geographer. I like it, it gets a five from me, good luck.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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5-3-5 Yes it ticks that box twice I see, now you are showing off. Lakes do stand still when they freeze. Do salt water lakes ever freeze? I would have to ask a geographer. I like it, it gets a five from me, good luck.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much reading and also for the review. I was just trying to step out of my normal writing habits. Thank you again.
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, The Thing about Salt, has the proper formatting and reminds us that salt has a tendency to resist freezing. I guess those icebergs never got the message. : )
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This lune poem, The Thing about Salt, has the proper formatting and reminds us that salt has a tendency to resist freezing. I guess those icebergs never got the message. : )
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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HaHa:) Thank you so much for your comments and review. I'll try to keep improving my writing style.
