Comment from royowen

Excellent

Except for the last phrase this could be an excerpt from Song of Songs which was written with the same passion as this was such a great post dear Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024

Yes, it's not based on the Song of Songs but Helen asked me to read it and I wrote a poem a while ago. It's very beautiful.

Thank you very much, Roy.

gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 23-Mar-2024

I was really comparing Gypsy.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a delightful love poem to the Lord! There's peace and security in His calming "nurturing words" and knowing that He has our best interest in how He answers our requests.

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thank you, big sister. I am happy you like it.

love,
marival

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem with much emotion and colorful imagery. Your presentation is balanced with a nice image and good colors that match, too. Thank you for sharing this. Have a good weekend!

Alexan

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

thank you very much, alexan

gypsy

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 21-Mar-2024

You're welcome, Gypsy!