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A mother fights to prove her son's innocence
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Ulla
Hi Jacob, this is a great continuation to the story. I really liked it and I hope there's someone who can help now.
I have a suggestion: 'No, well, he thinks what I'm doing is a waste of time. 'well' is not needed, besides, you used it in the previous sentence.
Now, on to the next chapter. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
Thank you Ulla, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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