Right in the Eye
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Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a very well written Western. I like the language used. I grew up reading and watching a lot of Louis L'Amour. There is a typo in the eighth paragraph of the 2nd chapter, it should read Ben's not ben's. Easy fix.
Keep writing, your style fits this genre very well.
RJ
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This is a very well written Western. I like the language used. I grew up reading and watching a lot of Louis L'Amour. There is a typo in the eighth paragraph of the 2nd chapter, it should read Ben's not ben's. Easy fix.
Keep writing, your style fits this genre very well.
RJ
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your review, and the catch.
And also, thank you immensely for the six stars!
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You're very welcome.
RJ
Comment from royowen
They say that unconscious people can actually hear very word that's ever uttered in their presence, so I'm certain that Slim thought he answered every question Ben had asked, beautifully written Wayne, super job, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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They say that unconscious people can actually hear very word that's ever uttered in their presence, so I'm certain that Slim thought he answered every question Ben had asked, beautifully written Wayne, super job, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I'm glad you bought the story line.
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Well dine
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Good job
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, I understand about Chapter lengths. It can be tricky. This was fine, a good way to go. I liked the way we got information about Slim from what he thought he was saying, a clever technique. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Yes, I understand about Chapter lengths. It can be tricky. This was fine, a good way to go. I liked the way we got information about Slim from what he thought he was saying, a clever technique. Looking forward to more.
Wendy
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you. And now we leave Ben Persons (and Ben Paul) for a bit. Hope it works.