2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "~ Harvest Time ~".
17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Another poem written with passion, but yet softer with a more joyful bent, and a great message, wending it's way through the narrative, beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Another poem written with passion, but yet softer with a more joyful bent, and a great message, wending it's way through the narrative, beautifully written Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
i like how you divided the pic up between the stanzas - cool!
and the bottom pic is amazing - like the corn is twinkling like stars
love the last two lines
where you come from
and where you'll go
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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i like how you divided the pic up between the stanzas - cool!
and the bottom pic is amazing - like the corn is twinkling like stars
love the last two lines
where you come from
and where you'll go
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Glenda Collins
Love the bright colors. Beautiful words to demonstrate God's love for us. The comparison that comes with our growth, and the sifting, and harvesting God does as He finishes His work in is very well done. Thank you for sharing this inspirational piece.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Love the bright colors. Beautiful words to demonstrate God's love for us. The comparison that comes with our growth, and the sifting, and harvesting God does as He finishes His work in is very well done. Thank you for sharing this inspirational piece.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Glenda.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written free verse poem. You used great descriptive words that made me feel like Jesus was gathering His harvest! love and blessings, Teri.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written free verse poem. You used great descriptive words that made me feel like Jesus was gathering His harvest! love and blessings, Teri.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Teri.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so welcome my friend!😊💕❤️
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like the feature of hope and how things will happen when they are supposed to. The imagery if the corn husks as the things that are holding you back. Seeing those things blowing away in the wind. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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I like the feature of hope and how things will happen when they are supposed to. The imagery if the corn husks as the things that are holding you back. Seeing those things blowing away in the wind. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Gretchen. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, Gretchen.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
I love the way your brain works. It is truly a thing of beauty. I have often said that the purpose of writing is to elicit emotion. Many of your works do that. From putting a smile to one's face or causing a belly laugh or teardrop. You my friend, are a bonafide author.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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I love the way your brain works. It is truly a thing of beauty. I have often said that the purpose of writing is to elicit emotion. Many of your works do that. From putting a smile to one's face or causing a belly laugh or teardrop. You my friend, are a bonafide author.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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You are so kind... I really appreciate I, Douglas. I am a very sensitive woman and I pour myself on the page.
Big hugs!
Gypsy
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You are the real deal, Gypsy Never doubt that!
Comment from patcelaw
They truly is a blessing it for harvest time when the crops are brought in from the labor of having put things together for the harvest to come. As a girl growing up on the farm, I enjoyed helping to harvest the crops from our big garden. Pat.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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They truly is a blessing it for harvest time when the crops are brought in from the labor of having put things together for the harvest to come. As a girl growing up on the farm, I enjoyed helping to harvest the crops from our big garden. Pat.
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words,
Gypsy hugs