Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. Jesus is the answer to this world. The pictures are also very nice. They go nice with your nice words. Great job I like the words you used.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024

Thank you, Brenda.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem, and it is just perfect timing with Easter coming up. I enjoyed it very much. I love your presentation. It is beautiful. Thank you.. Patricia .

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024

Thank you, Patricia.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You really captured the tender loving of the Lord in your poem. Love is His Message just as the gospel of John portrays Jesus. Great spiritual free verse poem!

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024

I changed it a little if you want to check it out.
Thank you, big sister, coming from you it means a lot to me.😘

love you,

marival