Comment from teafor2

Excellent

Gypsy, your sequence of senryu relates rather sensuous encounters...One gets the feeling that these are clandestine trysts between lovers...Thanks
for quadrupling my pleasure with these animated intimated teasingly enthralling snippets. teafor2

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by teafor2 on 12-Mar-2024

You are welcome. teafor2

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

A very romantic, erotic piece captured by the artwork and graphics used. It is a fine example of a Senryu poem. my favorite line ~fluttering in hidden places~ Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

LOVE that second senryu!!
also like the blue shadows part...
great imagery!
smooth flow throughout
i have no suggestions -
thank you for sharing
shelley :)


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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You captured the feelings of love between these lovers. You have a great way of expressing all the different senses of touch and even the deeper connection between the souls.

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,

Msrival