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Comment from teafor2
Justafan, I do not remember seeing any disclaimers or warnings on this
hot write...I like that you took it to heart: "Free Form...," The interpretive
picture and your enthralling cursive verbiage flowing (more like cascading)
seamless down the page was quite a shock when it ended...And I stopped
smoking. Well done siren-like entry for the contest. Good luck. teafor2
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Justafan, I do not remember seeing any disclaimers or warnings on this
hot write...I like that you took it to heart: "Free Form...," The interpretive
picture and your enthralling cursive verbiage flowing (more like cascading)
seamless down the page was quite a shock when it ended...And I stopped
smoking. Well done siren-like entry for the contest. Good luck. teafor2
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this free verse poetry contest, the passionate narrative is noteworthy in its obvious hint at a long term relationship, very tasteful and an attractive post, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
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This is an excellent entry in this free verse poetry contest, the passionate narrative is noteworthy in its obvious hint at a long term relationship, very tasteful and an attractive post, well done, good luck, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
I don't see your name pop up often these days, but it's always a please to read those lines that will definitely stick with anyone who has a heart. Thanks for sharing.
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I don't see your name pop up often these days, but it's always a please to read those lines that will definitely stick with anyone who has a heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This poem is very sensual and romantic. Lovely descriptions. This is a good entry for the Free Form poetry contest. Very good luck with it and thank you for sharing.
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This poem is very sensual and romantic. Lovely descriptions. This is a good entry for the Free Form poetry contest. Very good luck with it and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Begin Again
The stars are for you, your poem, and for instantly bringing me back in time to a place I so long to be again. Your poems have always managed to do that. Thanks for warming my heart and stirring my thoughts.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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The stars are for you, your poem, and for instantly bringing me back in time to a place I so long to be again. Your poems have always managed to do that. Thanks for warming my heart and stirring my thoughts.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem is well written! You can feel the longing and the wanting. It shows intense feels and curiosities. Then at the end it all comes together. It was more than you ever asked for. Love it!
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This poem is well written! You can feel the longing and the wanting. It shows intense feels and curiosities. Then at the end it all comes together. It was more than you ever asked for. Love it!
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2024