Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Behind Closed Doors"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from BethShelby
This two kid make pretty good playmates. I guess is is good for both of them to have someone to play with. Summers can get lonely when you don't have anyone your age near by.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This two kid make pretty good playmates. I guess is is good for both of them to have someone to play with. Summers can get lonely when you don't have anyone your age near by.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Beth. So glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Good natural dialogue between these two and they seem to be getting along very well and sharing a few secrets. A fine chapter Gretchen, always a pleasure to rad your work, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Good natural dialogue between these two and they seem to be getting along very well and sharing a few secrets. A fine chapter Gretchen, always a pleasure to rad your work, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm happy you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice progress. Too bad the castle isn't long for this world.
Mrs. Collette let's the smile fall away from her face. - No apostrophe (lets)
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Very nice progress. Too bad the castle isn't long for this world.
Mrs. Collette let's the smile fall away from her face. - No apostrophe (lets)
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Wayne. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from XinaD
This is very well written. You make great use of dialogue (I, myself, struggle with this so I'm always doubly impressed by those who do it exceptionally well) Nice pacing, great use of voice. I enjoyed reading this.
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is very well written. You make great use of dialogue (I, myself, struggle with this so I'm always doubly impressed by those who do it exceptionally well) Nice pacing, great use of voice. I enjoyed reading this.
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen