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A Wish

Talking to myself about you

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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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What a wish! and if it could come true! Almost everybody needs someone who can love them, a successful partnership. You hit the nail on the head with your concise poem. kay

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you so very much...and yes, I am still wishing.LOL. Bless you for your comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a heartfelt plea to the one person of desire to stay rather than leave and I wish you luck with this short poem about deep devotion, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    You nailed the exact personality that the poem was attempting, Dolly?. It was a plea.
    Thank you and your kind words. Blessings
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, to find love is what we desire, though to change ourselves for that love to remain is not honest love, this is a wonderful and very intriguing read, so very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    What nice comments to read. Thank you so very much?blessings and best wishes
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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If you have to ask someone if you could be the ONE person they don't leave, it doesn't say much for them. Your poem is good for the contest and you use vivid and expressive emotional words that match your photo.

Good work!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Alex.
    You have a way with words and I love reading what your thoughts are.
    Blessings
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well written senryu you have penned for the writing prompt. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your nice comments and compliments. Bless you