Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Life's Twisted Road - The End"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Carol,
What a journey for Isabella!
And what an accomplishment for you!
Congratulations on writing a memorable work - one that I know parallels your own life.
Gut-wrenching about Natasha and Ava...as well as Natasha's father...
So pleased all of the little gremlins were taken care of: nasty buggers!
One little note:
"The cross is a symbol of love, but more importantly, it's his (His) love for you."
Thank you for sharing,
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Carol,
What a journey for Isabella!
And what an accomplishment for you!
Congratulations on writing a memorable work - one that I know parallels your own life.
Gut-wrenching about Natasha and Ava...as well as Natasha's father...
So pleased all of the little gremlins were taken care of: nasty buggers!
One little note:
"The cross is a symbol of love, but more importantly, it's his (His) love for you."
Thank you for sharing,
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Diane for everything...reading, enjoying, alerting me to gremlins, and simply supporting me. I appreciate it so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This was great, Carol. It was a nice way to end it. It would be nice if you granddughter has actually decided to come clean. I'm glad you epilogue cleared up some of the actual facts. Do you think your family will ever get a chance to read your version of this dark place in your life?
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This was great, Carol. It was a nice way to end it. It would be nice if you granddughter has actually decided to come clean. I'm glad you epilogue cleared up some of the actual facts. Do you think your family will ever get a chance to read your version of this dark place in your life?
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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No one in my family will ever read this...unless maybe when I am dead. But then they don't read any of my stories so it doesn't really matter. What matters is that I was able to return to FS, write the story, and move forward. I appreciate your kindness and support.
Smiles, Carol
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Well if your kid read books at all, they don't know they're missing you are as good as anyone writer I've ever read.
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Now you have me in tears. Thank you! No, I have written all my life and have nearly 900 posts on FS, but they haven't ever even asked to read any of them. I'm always an after thought.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I tell my kids, this is about you. I would suggest that you read it and they do.
Lol. They are afraid of what I might say.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was incredible, Carol, a lovely ending for Isabella, although I don't want the real Isabella dying yet!! Your story is believable because huge chunks of it is true, and the part where Nat goes back to her lying ways is believable too. I could never see her changing, she is too self-centered. Ava, she should be ashamed of the way she treats her mother, and Becky? She had a lot to answer for, yet seems to have got away with it. She is as big a liar as Nat.
Well, my friend, you should stand up and pat yourself on the back, you did this story brilliantly, even though it must have been so painful to write. Very well done! Just one point that needs to fixed, about Nat, below. Now to read the next book! Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
She tossed her legs over the side of the bed and stood, (she was already standing and checked the hallway)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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That was incredible, Carol, a lovely ending for Isabella, although I don't want the real Isabella dying yet!! Your story is believable because huge chunks of it is true, and the part where Nat goes back to her lying ways is believable too. I could never see her changing, she is too self-centered. Ava, she should be ashamed of the way she treats her mother, and Becky? She had a lot to answer for, yet seems to have got away with it. She is as big a liar as Nat.
Well, my friend, you should stand up and pat yourself on the back, you did this story brilliantly, even though it must have been so painful to write. Very well done! Just one point that needs to fixed, about Nat, below. Now to read the next book! Love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
She tossed her legs over the side of the bed and stood, (she was already standing and checked the hallway)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I couldn't have done it without your encouragement and support, Sandra. I might still be sitting at the computer, staring at the blank page, and then walking away. I am beyond thankful. Because so many recognized a lot of my family and me, they didn't like the ending, but for me....not that I'm ready to die....I think Isabella found happiness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Somehow I can't get away from knowing this is an autobiography, there's always a measure of truth in these stories, you are a good writer Carol, but I knew you before. You left, and I think I know you now, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Somehow I can't get away from knowing this is an autobiography, there's always a measure of truth in these stories, you are a good writer Carol, but I knew you before. You left, and I think I know you now, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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It was a struggle on some days to finish this book, but I am so proud that I did. I am a different person now then I was, though I must admit at times I find myself sliding backwards. I guess that's why I like to read your poems first each morning...Inspiration! Thank you Roy
Smiles, Carol
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Bless you
Comment from Jasmine Girl
In this final chapter of a gripping tale, the author masterfully weaves together the threads of deception and redemption, culminating in a poignant conclusion. Natasha's journey of self-discovery, marred by lies and familial turmoil, reaches a crescendo as she grapples with the consequences of her actions.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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In this final chapter of a gripping tale, the author masterfully weaves together the threads of deception and redemption, culminating in a poignant conclusion. Natasha's journey of self-discovery, marred by lies and familial turmoil, reaches a crescendo as she grapples with the consequences of her actions.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much for reading and understanding how much this story meant to me. I appreciate your comments.
Thank you...
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
A very fitting ending! And although in your book, there was hope for Natasha in repentance, yet since Ava did not change, there is no hope for a permanent change without the Lord's intervention in their lives.
So glad you had the courage to share all this with believable characters and to Begin Again with your stories! Next time, please do a more happy post with the endearing characters you created before.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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A very fitting ending! And although in your book, there was hope for Natasha in repentance, yet since Ava did not change, there is no hope for a permanent change without the Lord's intervention in their lives.
So glad you had the courage to share all this with believable characters and to Begin Again with your stories! Next time, please do a more happy post with the endearing characters you created before.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your review, your encouragement, and understanding how much this book meant to me. I truly appreciate the kindness. Unfortunately, the next book is started and I'm not sure we will find endearing characters. I'll keep that in mind after I finish this one...I promise.
Smiles, Carol
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Okay. I'll be traveling later in the month and I won't be on here much.
By the way, since you have the stamina to post, are you doing the Novel in a Month contest?
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Yes...It's called Living on the Edge and I've posted several chapters. Thanks again and happy travels.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Bravo! This chapter is spectacular.
Proof positive that while you needed a hiatus for family reasons you have begun again with flair, skill, and a miraculous way of integrating the truth of what your own granddaughter's lies have done--the fractured DCFS system, the horrid way she has gotten away with some very friendly psych sessions...
And most importantly the way your daughter and others in your family have ostracized you for being the ever present voice of reason and opening your home and heart to them.
I hope one day they come to their senses. Mostly? I am so very proud of you for rising above the dysfunction and gifting us with a fantastic story.
Love you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Bravo! This chapter is spectacular.
Proof positive that while you needed a hiatus for family reasons you have begun again with flair, skill, and a miraculous way of integrating the truth of what your own granddaughter's lies have done--the fractured DCFS system, the horrid way she has gotten away with some very friendly psych sessions...
And most importantly the way your daughter and others in your family have ostracized you for being the ever present voice of reason and opening your home and heart to them.
I hope one day they come to their senses. Mostly? I am so very proud of you for rising above the dysfunction and gifting us with a fantastic story.
Love you!
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thanks for adding a smile to my face and warmth to my heart. I'm happy that I stuck it out...and some days it was painful... but I'm happier that so many enjoyed it. Thanks again for always being there to offer your support.
Smiles, Carol
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My sincere pleasure...
Comment from lancellot
This is a good ending. It would funny if Nat imagined her grandmother speaking her, that it was really her guilt. You want to add Lucille taking Becky downtown to her statements too.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is a good ending. It would funny if Nat imagined her grandmother speaking her, that it was really her guilt. You want to add Lucille taking Becky downtown to her statements too.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thanks for pointing that out about Becky. I thought I had, but clearly I hadn't. I did go back and add your suggestion. I truly appreciate the review and the stars. This story meant a lot to me and I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Geez, what am I" Chopped liver? I am sorry if any part of the story is true for you. We can pick our friends, we can pick our nose but we cannot pick our blood family. We choose people for our new family. The story ended with Natasha getting no punishment whatsoever. She killed her Grandmother, falsely accused her own father of repeated rape, ran around wild, and except for that brief period appears to have learned nothing. There was no ending to the core story. It just stopped. Not at all a happy camper..
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Geez, what am I" Chopped liver? I am sorry if any part of the story is true for you. We can pick our friends, we can pick our nose but we cannot pick our blood family. We choose people for our new family. The story ended with Natasha getting no punishment whatsoever. She killed her Grandmother, falsely accused her own father of repeated rape, ran around wild, and except for that brief period appears to have learned nothing. There was no ending to the core story. It just stopped. Not at all a happy camper..
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Well, not exactly. She was taken to headquarters and promised to tell all, leaving the reader to decide what happened. Yes, in real life, "Natasha" didn't receive any punishment for what she did. I'm sorry you felt it didn't have an ending. I thought Nat surrendering and Isabella dying was the ending. Maybe you will smile at the next book.
Smiles, Carol
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If you do submit the story anywhere I heartily suggest you have her writing her friend Becky from Women's prison complaining about the harsh soap. Karen
Comment from Teri7
Carol, I can't wait for your next endeavor. This was a great ending. I hope I get to read all of your next work. This was very touching to me. I love your new profile picture! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Carol, I can't wait for your next endeavor. This was a great ending. I hope I get to read all of your next work. This was very touching to me. I love your new profile picture! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying my story. I appreciate it very much. It amazes me how some wanted one ending and some a different one. For me, this was the most fitting.
Smiles, Carol