Here comes the moon
Japanese poetry club EKPHRASTIC POEM36 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
Your words paint such a pretty picture, even if there wasn't any picture. I love when you say the light glides on a glowing lake.
Beautiful!! Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Your words paint such a pretty picture, even if there wasn't any picture. I love when you say the light glides on a glowing lake.
Beautiful!! Great job!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Jodi, thank you so much. That means a lot!
Xoxo
Comment from Aussie
You paint a beautiful picture in your poem. The first thing I could see was the moon being draped in light. I liked your poem very much, it takes the reader to higher realms. K xx
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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You paint a beautiful picture in your poem. The first thing I could see was the moon being draped in light. I liked your poem very much, it takes the reader to higher realms. K xx
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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K, thank you so much. That means a lot:)
Xoxo
Comment from XinaD
I wasn't familiar with the term ekphrastic so I had to go and look it up. Once I did, I realized that this is absolutely the perfect example. Beautifully written, you paint the scene incredibly vividly for such a small word count constraint. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I wasn't familiar with the term ekphrastic so I had to go and look it up. Once I did, I realized that this is absolutely the perfect example. Beautifully written, you paint the scene incredibly vividly for such a small word count constraint. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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That means a lot to me, thank you!
Xoxo
Comment from estory
This little poem has a decided romantic feel to it. Very visual, very evocative. And somewhat mysterious, since you don't connect the images to anything emotional or specific. It's just a celebration of a beautiful moment. It could be the end of a day, or the beginning of a morning. estory
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This little poem has a decided romantic feel to it. Very visual, very evocative. And somewhat mysterious, since you don't connect the images to anything emotional or specific. It's just a celebration of a beautiful moment. It could be the end of a day, or the beginning of a morning. estory
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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estory, I love this comment. I am always grateful for your insight.
Thank you!
Jess
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. The personification and the alliteration are outstanding in so few words. The picture illustrates it very well.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is a an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. The personification and the alliteration are outstanding in so few words. The picture illustrates it very well.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Verna, thank you so much!
Xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-word poem, Here Comes the Moon, has the proper word count and serves the lake, the light, and the moon up as we consider the awesome sight.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This fifteen-word poem, Here Comes the Moon, has the proper word count and serves the lake, the light, and the moon up as we consider the awesome sight.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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thank you so much, Bill!!
Xoxo
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Such lovely images this brings to mind in only 4 lines. The artwork perfectly conveys the scene you are creating with your words. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Such lovely images this brings to mind in only 4 lines. The artwork perfectly conveys the scene you are creating with your words. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Marilyn, thank you so much!
Xoxo
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a remarkable and lovely 15 word poem Jessica. I loved each line in this delightfully descriptive poem. The imagery and artwork are
Beautiful!
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is a remarkable and lovely 15 word poem Jessica. I loved each line in this delightfully descriptive poem. The imagery and artwork are
Beautiful!
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Janet, thank you so much. Your reviews always make me smile!
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from Sally Law
How lovely is this ekphrastic expression. Fifteen words never looked so beautiful. Sending you my very best, dear Jess, and my very best wishes for the challenge. Magnificent!
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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How lovely is this ekphrastic expression. Fifteen words never looked so beautiful. Sending you my very best, dear Jess, and my very best wishes for the challenge. Magnificent!
Sal Xos
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Sally, thank you so much. That means the world!
Xoxo
Jess
Comment from Lisasview
When I first read your title dearest Jessica,,, I began singing.. "Here come the Sun little darlin...Here comes the sun..."
I just love your image and your delightful words.
Really so good...
Lisa
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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When I first read your title dearest Jessica,,, I began singing.. "Here come the Sun little darlin...Here comes the sun..."
I just love your image and your delightful words.
Really so good...
Lisa
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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lol Lisa, that was totally in my head, too! Thank you!
Xoxo
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Funny isn't it how just a word or two can bring back songs...
Lisa