Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from royowen
I guess that's how we spoil our children by constantly not allow our children to be accountable for their actions, but I suspect this time Natasha might not get away with it, you've written a story about complex characters in a complex plot, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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I guess that's how we spoil our children by constantly not allow our children to be accountable for their actions, but I suspect this time Natasha might not get away with it, you've written a story about complex characters in a complex plot, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy. I often wonder how life might have been different...what could have been done to change things or prevent them. How many generations led up to it or did it just sprout out of nowhere? Hope you enjoy the ending tomorrow.
Thanks so much.
Carol
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The $64 question
Comment from lyenochka
Natasha continues to be horrible and her mother seems to be clueless. I wonder if Becky would feel the same about her friend if she matured a few years. But as a friend, she quickly covered for her friend. Hope someone will start piecing things together soon.
Is the last chapter tomorrow?
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Natasha continues to be horrible and her mother seems to be clueless. I wonder if Becky would feel the same about her friend if she matured a few years. But as a friend, she quickly covered for her friend. Hope someone will start piecing things together soon.
Is the last chapter tomorrow?
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Becky's loyalty is steadfast, but I believe as time goes by, she would navigate toward Gabby instead. I would hope Nat might someday see the light, but it doesn't seem likely.
Thanks so much for following and supporting my writing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Brilliant writing - and again, I wish I had a six. Now, that photo that was knocked off the wall - that couldn't have happened by Isabella having a fall in her bedroom by tripping on a rug - and the other treasured things Natasha knocked down as well. Hope the police pick up on those things! Can't wait for tomorrow.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Brilliant writing - and again, I wish I had a six. Now, that photo that was knocked off the wall - that couldn't have happened by Isabella having a fall in her bedroom by tripping on a rug - and the other treasured things Natasha knocked down as well. Hope the police pick up on those things! Can't wait for tomorrow.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Your words of support and enjoyment say more than the six. I truly appreciate your love of the story and my efforts. Thank you again.... See you tomorrow! Fingers crossed that you are pleased with the ending.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This was a very, very interesting chapter that you've written here and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I was trying to watch TV and there's really nothing on TV so it was better just to listen to somebody's excellent writing and I chose your work. Have a good day, and may God bless. Pat.
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This was a very, very interesting chapter that you've written here and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I was trying to watch TV and there's really nothing on TV so it was better just to listen to somebody's excellent writing and I chose your work. Have a good day, and may God bless. Pat.
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I am extremely flattered that I received such a honor as to be chosen over TV or someone else's work. The final chapter of the story will be posted on Sunday. I hope you enjoy it and find it a good choice as the ending.
Smiles, Carol
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So far, I have enjoyed your book very much, and I do look forward to the finale of it
Comment from Julie Helms
The cliffhanger of all cliffhangers! I read this chapter so fast, because it was just zooming along with all the action. Well told action, well told lies. Those girls need some comeuppance! Eagerly awaiting Sunday. Julie. :-)
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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The cliffhanger of all cliffhangers! I read this chapter so fast, because it was just zooming along with all the action. Well told action, well told lies. Those girls need some comeuppance! Eagerly awaiting Sunday. Julie. :-)
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks Julie. I just posted this one. I got antsy and couldn't wait till tomorrow morning. I'm thrilled that you thought the story was "zooming" with action. I can't wait to see how you react to the ending.
Smiles, Carol