A More Colorful Me
We all have a creative pixie inside.19 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Yes, our muse can appear in all forms... and I so agree with your authors notes...
I enjoyed your words and reading and reviewing your work.
Wishing you the very best in the My Muse contest.
Lisa
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Yes, our muse can appear in all forms... and I so agree with your authors notes...
I enjoyed your words and reading and reviewing your work.
Wishing you the very best in the My Muse contest.
Lisa
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Lisa. Hoping it does well, but you never know on FS. I am a fledgling poet. Tried a little alliteration and internal rhymes here as well. We shall see!
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It is always good to try,
Lisa
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I think so. Not sure if I?m really the poet type. More of a fiction prose writer. Still trying to find my way.
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Good to be trying to figure it out...
I know I am much more of a poetess than a story writer although I did just win first place for my Missing in Walmart story.
Lisa
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Yes, I saw that ....]
Lisasview
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you consider yourself to be creative and rather fiery, edgy and strong and not marriage material. This post made me smile, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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It sounds like you consider yourself to be creative and rather fiery, edgy and strong and not marriage material. This post made me smile, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Well, Miss Dolly, I would say that is the writing side of me, but not the real face-to-face side. Fun contest!
Comment from teafor2
Unknown bard, I like the moxie in this feminist (not rant) informal 'oration' there's just a 'slew' of poetics...I will not bother to single them out, but I
spotted alliterations; internal rhymes and the forever true end rhymes. I probably shouldn't mention my little 'nit pick.' I disagree with what reads like a 'blanket' statement: "We all have a creative pixie inside." That's all I
want to say about that:) Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Unknown bard, I like the moxie in this feminist (not rant) informal 'oration' there's just a 'slew' of poetics...I will not bother to single them out, but I
spotted alliterations; internal rhymes and the forever true end rhymes. I probably shouldn't mention my little 'nit pick.' I disagree with what reads like a 'blanket' statement: "We all have a creative pixie inside." That's all I
want to say about that:) Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Ah, but I did not say creative writing pixie. Some have art, speech, teach, sing, drawing, or a myriad of other creative talents. I?ve yet to meet a talentless person.
Thank you for the awesome review. I did put some work into hitting some peppering marks other than just the end rhymes. Glad your keen eye caught this. A fun contest, indeed!
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from bob cullen
I like how this is written. It has an unusual rhyme pattern but it remains consistent throughout the verse. It flows smoothly and made for an enjoyable read. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I like how this is written. It has an unusual rhyme pattern but it remains consistent throughout the verse. It flows smoothly and made for an enjoyable read. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I was trying for something unique in my pattern. Not sure if I hit the mark, but I did like the flow. Hope you enjoyed it. I think it is doing well.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so witty and clever. I think the picture captures your poem very well. I see the twinkle in eye, like she is up to somrthing, Great job
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so witty and clever. I think the picture captures your poem very well. I see the twinkle in eye, like she is up to somrthing, Great job
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Im always too Chicken to follow the contests. I don?t like to be anxious about my writings. Still, I have a feeling it is doing well from peoples? comments as many have enjoyed this one. Appreciate your kind words. Blessings!
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Good details throughout the poem. Your last three lines stood out to me in this poem. Your picture compliments the poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Good details throughout the poem. Your last three lines stood out to me in this poem. Your picture compliments the poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you! This is a fun contest.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jeano
OH, my gosh. I don't think I have to read any of the others, this one is so great! But, before I choose, I must read them all. I have a feeling I'll be coming back to vote for yours. It's catchy, cute, great rhyming and rings true. Good luck in the competition. It's worthy of an extra star. I loved it.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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OH, my gosh. I don't think I have to read any of the others, this one is so great! But, before I choose, I must read them all. I have a feeling I'll be coming back to vote for yours. It's catchy, cute, great rhyming and rings true. Good luck in the competition. It's worthy of an extra star. I loved it.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you! I hope she does well in the competition! I appreciate the awesome sixer!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem shows me that poetry is deep inside your heart, and what makes you you!
Sometimes we dont even know what we are or what we do until it happens. Then we "water" the part that we love the most, or that we want others to see.
I love the way you think and how you put that into a poem! Well done!
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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This poem shows me that poetry is deep inside your heart, and what makes you you!
Sometimes we dont even know what we are or what we do until it happens. Then we "water" the part that we love the most, or that we want others to see.
I love the way you think and how you put that into a poem! Well done!
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you! Great insight. We?ll see how it holds up against stiff competition!
Comment from RodG
Your characterization of your muse is delightful. I can easily visualize this redhead with a snarky attitude speaking non-stop to you while encouraging you to keep writing. Rod
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Your characterization of your muse is delightful. I can easily visualize this redhead with a snarky attitude speaking non-stop to you while encouraging you to keep writing. Rod
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Rod! Another fun FS contest!