Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 30"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from royowen
Wow! I think the unfortunate thing these days is that they tend to believer the accuser, with or without a physical check, so Natasha is mistaken if she's not believed, and her dad's in real trouble, Isobel doesn't have a choice, she must defend Natasha's father, plus there's Becky also knowing the truth., I don't believe Natasha's that evil...but? So, beautifully written Carol blessings Royb
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Wow! I think the unfortunate thing these days is that they tend to believer the accuser, with or without a physical check, so Natasha is mistaken if she's not believed, and her dad's in real trouble, Isobel doesn't have a choice, she must defend Natasha's father, plus there's Becky also knowing the truth., I don't believe Natasha's that evil...but? So, beautifully written Carol blessings Royb
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I believe at least temporarily she'll see the evil in her ways, but nothing lasts forever. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Three more chapters to go. Finished writing this afternoon so it's safe to say I've wrapped it up.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Nat needs locking away. She won't help her father by telling the truth. The only thing that can happen is if Becky tells the police where they were. And of course, Isabella knows the truth, but no one will believe her is she say something. What a nasty child Nat is. I'd love to see her locked up!! Another excellent chapter, but it has made me angry she will get away with it. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Nat needs locking away. She won't help her father by telling the truth. The only thing that can happen is if Becky tells the police where they were. And of course, Isabella knows the truth, but no one will believe her is she say something. What a nasty child Nat is. I'd love to see her locked up!! Another excellent chapter, but it has made me angry she will get away with it. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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My exact feelings.... Once in a while she seems to sense her evil ways, but it never lasts for long. I've finished and put a wrap on the story...three chapters. I tried to narrow it down, but it wasn't happening. I hope you enjoy the fireworks and the ending.
Smiles to you, my friend. Love ya, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Isabella knows the truth and other already suspect something is fishy. What is Isabella going to do now. She has to speak up and there's no way Natasha is going to tell the truth and if she finds our Isabella knows she'll hurt her. I do like this story.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Isabella knows the truth and other already suspect something is fishy. What is Isabella going to do now. She has to speak up and there's no way Natasha is going to tell the truth and if she finds our Isabella knows she'll hurt her. I do like this story.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Hello, Barbara....
The story is finished and wrapped this afternoon. Three chapters left with twists, turns, and explosions. It's a rocky road and people are going to get hurt... Hope it's the right ones.
Smiles, Carol
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I hope it's the right ones too.
Comment from karenina
Wow. This has moved Natasha from a brat/teen/rabble-rouser to a young woman with serious mental health issues. Anyone who would falsely accuse their father and then admit it to their friend but qualify that "maybe" dear old dad would deserve some punishment for yelling at her so much is seriously unbalanced.
The good news is she admitted it to Becky. And Isabelle heard it as well.
Once these accusations are made, they take on a life of their own, though and it may not be as simple to untie the triple knot Nat has tied the family up in!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Wow. This has moved Natasha from a brat/teen/rabble-rouser to a young woman with serious mental health issues. Anyone who would falsely accuse their father and then admit it to their friend but qualify that "maybe" dear old dad would deserve some punishment for yelling at her so much is seriously unbalanced.
The good news is she admitted it to Becky. And Isabelle heard it as well.
Once these accusations are made, they take on a life of their own, though and it may not be as simple to untie the triple knot Nat has tied the family up in!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Good morning...
You pegged it perfectly! Once the snowball is in downhill motion, one can not stop it, unless you want to put yourself on the line and admit the lies. Doesn't sound like Natasha though. Isabella could be a good witness, but she would want Nat to come clean, to really clear the air. Hmmm!
Thanks so much as always. As I see It at this moment (haha) this whole mess should be wrapped up in 3 chapters. I know I know...I said it before, but I'm pretty sure how its going to go down.
Smiles, Carol
POST NOTE: I just saw what shenanigans you have been up to again You are blowing me away, girlfriend. Thank you but youdon't have to keep doing this, My appreciation goes without words but you work hard for those precious dollars. Hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
You are moving this story along nicely. I don't want to see her get away with falsely accusing her father. If there was no DNA test, they wouldn't be able to say for sure she wasn't lying. I seen what teenagers can do to their male teachers they have a problem with. I'm looking forward to more.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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You are moving this story along nicely. I don't want to see her get away with falsely accusing her father. If there was no DNA test, they wouldn't be able to say for sure she wasn't lying. I seen what teenagers can do to their male teachers they have a problem with. I'm looking forward to more.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thanks Beth.... Refusing the rape kit makes some wonder why, yet others still believe her. It's a tightrope situation.
Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gunner Lil
Another excellent chapter in your novel.
The author has created the characters with traits that reflects their level of maturity and occupations.
Great story.
Hopefully Isabella will do the proper thing.
Thank you!
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Another excellent chapter in your novel.
The author has created the characters with traits that reflects their level of maturity and occupations.
Great story.
Hopefully Isabella will do the proper thing.
Thank you!
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I thank you for your time, review and thoughtful comments. Have a great day! Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is another wonderfully written chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the very best with your book. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia .
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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This is another wonderfully written chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the very best with your book. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia .
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I thank you for your time, review and thoughtful comments. Have a great day! Smiles, Carol