Willing Hearts
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Comment from derek campbell
Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Wow such an amazing writer you are I love everything about it your really good I Can't wait to see more of your amazing skills but next time try and express your feeling a bit more deeper on certain areas but other then that really good stuff can't wait to read more of your magic keep it up
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I rarely get three stars. Please check my other reviews. Thank you for dropping by.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I still think she is impossibly naive and appears to have a death wish. It's a wonder she can dress herself. You do write well sweetheart, but she is dim.
You write so well in fact, you get me all stirred up. I want hit her with a newspaper on the top of her head and tell her to wake up. I will keep reading dear.
Karen
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I still think she is impossibly naive and appears to have a death wish. It's a wonder she can dress herself. You do write well sweetheart, but she is dim.
You write so well in fact, you get me all stirred up. I want hit her with a newspaper on the top of her head and tell her to wake up. I will keep reading dear.
Karen
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Sami is dealing with a lot of guilt. She feels she's responsoable for Myra being kidnapped because she didn't get there in time. Humans do strange things over guilt. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Somehow I missed your previous post.So I read both together .Sammy is too independent and hence she had to get caught in the net and Noah had to rescue her again.But she still is angry with him .This is different from the other novels of yours and I am really enjoying readin g this.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Somehow I missed your previous post.So I read both together .Sammy is too independent and hence she had to get caught in the net and Noah had to rescue her again.But she still is angry with him .This is different from the other novels of yours and I am really enjoying readin g this.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Sami is not going to forgive Noah any time soon, but she should try to see what happened from his POV. She got herself into a very dangerous situation and had no idea how dangerous it was. Sadly, she knows about as much about the girls kidnapped from the recreation center as Noah, and that isn't much.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Sami is not going to forgive Noah any time soon, but she should try to see what happened from his POV. She got herself into a very dangerous situation and had no idea how dangerous it was. Sadly, she knows about as much about the girls kidnapped from the recreation center as Noah, and that isn't much.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami will come to understand the situation.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your story is suspenseful. Human trafficking is a terrible topic to write about but like they say someone must write about it. There have been 27.6 million people who have been victims of this crime. No one wants to become a victim.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Your story is suspenseful. Human trafficking is a terrible topic to write about but like they say someone must write about it. There have been 27.6 million people who have been victims of this crime. No one wants to become a victim.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your new story and the characters are growing on me. (*÷*)
Sami is acting like a little brat but if I put myself in her shoes I understand.
It sounds like Noah saved her from a dangerous situation. It wasn't very smart on semi's part but she was following her heart.
I noticed the biblical names... Noah and Joshua.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I like your new story and the characters are growing on me. (*÷*)
Sami is acting like a little brat but if I put myself in her shoes I understand.
It sounds like Noah saved her from a dangerous situation. It wasn't very smart on semi's part but she was following her heart.
I noticed the biblical names... Noah and Joshua.
Well done
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Sami is dealing with the guilt she feels over Myra's kidnapping. She didn't get to her in time. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
Excellent writing, Barbara. I really like how you're revealing more about your character's, but I think it'll be a while before Sami can trust Noah. I can see his desire to protect her, but I'm not sure she quite sees that yet. An excellent piece. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Excellent writing, Barbara. I really like how you're revealing more about your character's, but I think it'll be a while before Sami can trust Noah. I can see his desire to protect her, but I'm not sure she quite sees that yet. An excellent piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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You're right. Sami is very leery of Noah. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Many Blessings on the Wednesday plan! I couldn't do that and I'm not even finished with Chapter 3 yet! This novel is really the type of writing that stirs you along, and I feel I'm in for a wild ride. I hope Noah is on the up and up, but I guess you'll have to show me. Keep up the great caliber of writing!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Many Blessings on the Wednesday plan! I couldn't do that and I'm not even finished with Chapter 3 yet! This novel is really the type of writing that stirs you along, and I feel I'm in for a wild ride. I hope Noah is on the up and up, but I guess you'll have to show me. Keep up the great caliber of writing!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Noah is a good guy. Thank you for the kind review.
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I was hoping I was right. Thanks!
Comment from Ben Colder
Out of six but you would have it. This happening is too many times here in America. I never dreamed America would need tro deal with this sort of thing but we do. Thanks Barb . A good one.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Out of six but you would have it. This happening is too many times here in America. I never dreamed America would need tro deal with this sort of thing but we do. Thanks Barb . A good one.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful support.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm not talking about the subject matter, but the job you're doing of writing it. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six to reward it properly.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm not talking about the subject matter, but the job you're doing of writing it. Thanks for sharing. Wish I had a six to reward it properly.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I appreciate the virtual six and you encouragement. I appreciate it.
