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Dad's Voice

300 word flash non fiction writing on faith

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is well written, and I wish you the very best for the contest. May you have a pleasant day and a good week. It is nice that you still have something that you can listen to your dad's voice from time to time.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your super review. We were really lucky to have recordings.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Well, "Sister," I wish you well in the challenge, and I appreciate your eighteen months of service. We became members in '83 when I was selling insurance and knock on the Mission home in Roanoke Va. Because of that cold call, we adopted two infants in '87 and '92 after we found ourselves infertile. Where is it you attend today?

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your kind comments. I am going to my home ward in Utah now, but maybe only 10 people are from the same ward population from the 1980s. Hope your family is doing well.
Comment from lyenochka
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I remember your story about serving in Puerto Rico but I didn't know about your gifts of origami animals which you made with faith and gave in faith to bless people around you. Thanks for sharing about your father, too! A lovely story. Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your kind review. And the well wishes.