It's Her Anniversary
She Joined FanStory February 202223 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
There is alot going on in this poem. It appears to be a personal poem for a friend, so I believe most of it is meant for her understanding alone. But with that in mind, I did enjoy it and can appreciate the creativity of the first letters in each line. Not an easy thing to do. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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There is alot going on in this poem. It appears to be a personal poem for a friend, so I believe most of it is meant for her understanding alone. But with that in mind, I did enjoy it and can appreciate the creativity of the first letters in each line. Not an easy thing to do. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thanks for you discernment. Your 3rd eye is at work for this. She has no idea, but it is her anniversary month at FS :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! I don't think I've read another acrostic that flows this smoothly and actually resembles normal narration and dialogue! It's quite a feat. So to add humour as well is impressive. It's great fun! Only desp(e)rate. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Haha! I don't think I've read another acrostic that flows this smoothly and actually resembles normal narration and dialogue! It's quite a feat. So to add humour as well is impressive. It's great fun! Only desp(e)rate. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thanks for your response and "eagle eye" syntax get. I'll fix it as soon as I finish answering these reviews:)
Comment from nomi338
A rule of thumb for me is to never fall in love or even like with someone i have never been able to look directly into the eyes of touch, smell, and feel. Failing this I try to maintain a discreet distance and carefully observe. I found this poetic work interesting and intriguing. Good work.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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A rule of thumb for me is to never fall in love or even like with someone i have never been able to look directly into the eyes of touch, smell, and feel. Failing this I try to maintain a discreet distance and carefully observe. I found this poetic work interesting and intriguing. Good work.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Ditto! And great discernment. I appreciate your candid response:)
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Teafor2,
This is a good acrostic ode for Sombul for her anniversary. I'll have to check her out. I think you give good advice when saying you should not rush into a new relationship after a break up.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Hi Teafor2,
This is a good acrostic ode for Sombul for her anniversary. I'll have to check her out. I think you give good advice when saying you should not rush into a new relationship after a break up.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Joan, thanks for affirming my advice, in all truth, I made up most of this up...This is her anniversary month, but she didn't ask for my advice.
Heck, she doesn't even know about this. I reviewed four of her poems and were so somber. I thought this might cheer her. teafor2
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You're welcome, teafor2. It is thoughtful of you to try to cheer her up.
Joan
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Thanks, but it's selfish as well...Did you
read her last post...About writing her life, it is goose-bumps stuff:)
Comment from Begin Again
The picture of a young lady staring out at the moon and all its stars makes the reader wonder what her thoughts might be....Your poem tells us that she's lost faith in people she's met online.... usually not a good way to meet. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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The picture of a young lady staring out at the moon and all its stars makes the reader wonder what her thoughts might be....Your poem tells us that she's lost faith in people she's met online.... usually not a good way to meet. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Carol, thanks for your comments and sentiments about this post.
You show empathy for this lonely woman who went looking for love in the wrong places. teafor2
Comment from karenina
I think I'd have to be younger to understand the slang...
Sounds like somebody got hurt in an online situation and "works out" her emotions by posting sad poems?
Writing therapy is fairly cheap and almost always effective!
One out of EIGHT is a slime? Hmmm. That's optimistic!
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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I think I'd have to be younger to understand the slang...
Sounds like somebody got hurt in an online situation and "works out" her emotions by posting sad poems?
Writing therapy is fairly cheap and almost always effective!
One out of EIGHT is a slime? Hmmm. That's optimistic!
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Karenina, in all fairness I wrote this in a humorous vein, hoping to get
her to loosen up by writing positive w/lighter stuff. I think she did a better with one of last post. teafor2
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Okay.... Glad it worked!
:)
Comment from Lisasview
Well, I am not one of your old Fan Story friends who befriended you after you were gone a long time... I am a new friend... and friends...old or new are important...
Lisa
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Well, I am not one of your old Fan Story friends who befriended you after you were gone a long time... I am a new friend... and friends...old or new are important...
Lisa
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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lisa, that's so true...Thanks for your comments and shared sentiment
I sent you a nomination from your profile after the Fanstory staff told me how. I appreciated all the help with the editor. teafor2
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I never got it??? Just go onto any one of your reviews for me and select nominate...
Thank you
Comment from Raul1
This is a very creative, interesting, and impressive poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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This is a very creative, interesting, and impressive poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Raul1, you are welcome.
Comment from pome lover
well, did she take your advice, Step-uncle?
That is some poem.
Hate to be out of the loop, but what is scrubs?
Anyway, I hope she has an enjoyable time on FS, and listens to your advice.
Katharine
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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well, did she take your advice, Step-uncle?
That is some poem.
Hate to be out of the loop, but what is scrubs?
Anyway, I hope she has an enjoyable time on FS, and listens to your advice.
Katharine
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Katharine, thanks for your comments, personal response and GREAT
query about "scrubs." This an "insignificant or contemptible person"
and it goes down-hill from that! teafor2
Comment from Gunner Lil
This reader enjoyed this poem very much.
The picture you used is fantastic as well.
Your poem is such an easy read that incorporates a very good flow and fine pace.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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This reader enjoyed this poem very much.
The picture you used is fantastic as well.
Your poem is such an easy read that incorporates a very good flow and fine pace.
Thank you!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Gunner Lil, thanks for your comments, personal sentiments and gen-
erous stars. Your response is appreciated. teafor2