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Ruby Bridges

A forefront of integration

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Comment from QC Poet
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A very nice poem in an Acrostic poem four celebrating Black History Month I enjoyed reading your well thought out poem and I believe that there is a double spacing error on G line that I'm sure could be corrected by the line completed the sentence instead of placing it under the G
Thank you for Sharing your Tribute Poem
Blessings to you

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    QC Poet, Thanks for weighing in on this. Your 'comments and sentiments are shared." teafor2
Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, Ruby Bridges, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of the historic integration struggles of which she was an official part.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Bill, thanks for your discernment. Your comments and sentiment made me pause. Thanks, you are a mensch:) teafor2
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for giving tribute to Ruby Bridges. I read about her in LJButterfly's post yesterday! I'm happy to see her getting due recognition!
I was a little confused by one line:
I ntered (Do you mean Interred as in "buried"? That would go nicely with the "groundbreaking."

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    lyenochka, thanks for your comments, sentiments and query. teafor2
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is a well written poem that shares the journey that she went through. Each line conveys a sense of determination and defiance, making the poem both impactful and thought-provoking. A perfect tribute. Well done!

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Michael, thanks for your discernment. Your response made me pause...Thank you! teafor2
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I didn't know about this young girl's contribution to integration so thank you so much for this informative post in such an attractive, readable format! You've also introduced me to a new word, 'intered' which I'm afraid I had to look up but which fits your theme so well. Every word is a little gem! Many thanks for sharing. Debbie

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Debbie, thanks for your too nice comments, shared sentiments and
    personal point. Sorry, I didn't mean to make you use your Funk and
    Wagnals:) teafor2
Comment from Lisasview
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Good morning,
Yes fun fact ... always do enjoy those... Thank you for reminding all of us...
Really appreciate it...
Lisa, cool morning here in Spain...a few sprinkles...
Take care.......

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2024

reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
    Lisa, thanks for your response. Your comments, sentiments, "suggestions" (past...in reference to 'fonts') have been a big help:) teafor2