Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Life's Twisted Road - Chapter 26"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You are amazing. I think things have settled down, and here you come stirring the pot, I never know what's going to happen. Have a good weekend, Good writing . Karen
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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You are amazing. I think things have settled down, and here you come stirring the pot, I never know what's going to happen. Have a good weekend, Good writing . Karen
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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We're getting close to the end...but fireworks are still brewing. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
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you are welcome
Comment from Wendy G
My goodness Carol, I certainly hope this bit is fiction. Powerful and dramatic writing! Why did the girls not go back to Ava's place? They are certainly taking advantage of Isabella and now they are putting her life in danger too.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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My goodness Carol, I certainly hope this bit is fiction. Powerful and dramatic writing! Why did the girls not go back to Ava's place? They are certainly taking advantage of Isabella and now they are putting her life in danger too.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I wish I could say this chapter and the ones that follow are pure fiction, but most of it happened in one form or another. I suppose that's why I dropped out of site for so long, just struggling with what life handed me. It's still not the best, but I am working at seperting myself from the pain and disrespect. Thank you so much for all your kindness, Wendy. I truly appreciate the support and encouragement.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Crazy girls... Just at that age where their age exceeds their "working" IQ!
Bet their jail bait outfits didn't help in the rose bushes!
Oh dear. Did Isabella hear the scream?
Please tell me she calls 911 rather than rush toward the danger!
The last two chapters are much too pivotal and exciting not to be up on the home page...
So?
Merry Christmas?
(Very late or very early)
:)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Crazy girls... Just at that age where their age exceeds their "working" IQ!
Bet their jail bait outfits didn't help in the rose bushes!
Oh dear. Did Isabella hear the scream?
Please tell me she calls 911 rather than rush toward the danger!
The last two chapters are much too pivotal and exciting not to be up on the home page...
So?
Merry Christmas?
(Very late or very early)
:)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart... I hope to do the same with the final chapters... I really want to make a point. Love you!
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Oops. I was supposed to go read your email! On it! Now!
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! Those silly girls have brought danger to themselves and their grandmother. Whose scream was it? I guess that's one way to wake up Isabella. Will she know to call the police?
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Oh no! Those silly girls have brought danger to themselves and their grandmother. Whose scream was it? I guess that's one way to wake up Isabella. Will she know to call the police?
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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With those two girls...nothing goes as planned. They just keep getting in deeper and deeper. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's getting stormier as we go.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Oh, this is terrifying and Isabella just went to sleep!
I'm sorry, it was unkind of me, but when Natasha had to go over the rosebush all I could think about were those short shorts that don't cover her butt. Not so sexy now.
Powerful cliff hanger!
Julie
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Oh, this is terrifying and Isabella just went to sleep!
I'm sorry, it was unkind of me, but when Natasha had to go over the rosebush all I could think about were those short shorts that don't cover her butt. Not so sexy now.
Powerful cliff hanger!
Julie
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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You and just about everyone else thought she deserved those thorns. Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Carol!
Well, first of all, you had me at "amaretto stone sours" = my all-time favorite alcoholic beverage!
But those girls are truly "something else," and it's not a "good" "something else!"
Ending was very powerful and frightening! Much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing!
Whew!
diane
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Hello, Carol!
Well, first of all, you had me at "amaretto stone sours" = my all-time favorite alcoholic beverage!
But those girls are truly "something else," and it's not a "good" "something else!"
Ending was very powerful and frightening! Much enjoyed!
Thank you for sharing!
Whew!
diane
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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I'll drink to that, Diane. I've had a few of the ameretto stone sours, but not much anymore. Though I like my Amaretto creamer in my morning coffee. Thank you so much for sticking with the story. It's about to get stormy.
Smiles, Carol