Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed envisioning the scene with Natasha and Becky hiding out in the bushes. Your description of the two frightened girls was excellent. The dog just added additional reality to the scene. I like how you cover all the angles, like Judy possibly blaming Dion for the accident. Every chapter is filled with mystery and suspense...just the way I like it. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed envisioning the scene with Natasha and Becky hiding out in the bushes. Your description of the two frightened girls was excellent. The dog just added additional reality to the scene. I like how you cover all the angles, like Judy possibly blaming Dion for the accident. Every chapter is filled with mystery and suspense...just the way I like it. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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I thought a little "levity" in this dark drama was indeed neededed and who better to have baptized by the dog, Prince? Judy thought her and Bobby were something special and it might hurt to have to point the finger at Bobby. But she's a good person deep down and hopefully will do the right thing.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
It's certainly true that judy's A good kid under that covering robe of make up lies a girl screaming out for eexceptance in a world that sits in judgment, Natasha and Becky have at last got a painfully maimed Juan back from the dead. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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It's certainly true that judy's A good kid under that covering robe of make up lies a girl screaming out for eexceptance in a world that sits in judgment, Natasha and Becky have at last got a painfully maimed Juan back from the dead. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Roy.
I believe in the end, Judy will do the right thing (at least I hope she does). But Natasha and Becky are only beginning their trip down the wrong road.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
It's good that Gabby sensed what really happened and isn't blinded by allegiance to her father. I hope Judy will clear Dion of any wrongdoing and tell about how the drugs go into Dion's truck. There's hope for Gabby. I don't know about Becky and Natasha as they weren't shaken up enough after what they witnessed of Juan's dark life
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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It's good that Gabby sensed what really happened and isn't blinded by allegiance to her father. I hope Judy will clear Dion of any wrongdoing and tell about how the drugs go into Dion's truck. There's hope for Gabby. I don't know about Becky and Natasha as they weren't shaken up enough after what they witnessed of Juan's dark life
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Gabby is faced with "growing up" real fast but she's a good girl and believes right is right. Judy had stars in her eyes for Bobby, but she also knows when things are wrong. Becky and Natasha are only at the beginning of their path down the wrong road. Thanks so much for everything, Helen.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
These little girls are seeing a lot of more of the life on the wild side most adullts haven't seen. They're growing up way to fast. I know they think they're cool but they playing with fire. Gabby seems to care but she has lost so much in her life.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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These little girls are seeing a lot of more of the life on the wild side most adullts haven't seen. They're growing up way to fast. I know they think they're cool but they playing with fire. Gabby seems to care but she has lost so much in her life.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Yes, Beth, they think they are cool and that older adults, especially Isabella, are out of touch with things. Their path is headed down the wrong road and it's quite dark. Unfortunately, Isabella is drug down with them.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm here hoping she clears Dion too. Being a nice guy has gotten him into all sorts of trouble. Thank you for sharing this with us. I do hope Jackson does a complete investigation. Love the story.
"Oh my God, it's Juan." Becky whimpered. (Juan,)
Natasha laughed, "A sleep-over, after all." (laughed.)
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I'm here hoping she clears Dion too. Being a nice guy has gotten him into all sorts of trouble. Thank you for sharing this with us. I do hope Jackson does a complete investigation. Love the story.
"Oh my God, it's Juan." Becky whimpered. (Juan,)
Natasha laughed, "A sleep-over, after all." (laughed.)
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I think in the end, Judy will clear his name and Audry will hopefully straighten things out with Jackson. As for Natasha and BEcky...I think they are headed for big trouble.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She has to know it wasn't Dion's fault. The poor lad has been to hell and is still there! Judy has to put it right for him. And Jason has to own his share of the blame, if he'd done the right thing, none of this would have happened, well, at least nothing would have happened to Dion, Bobby would still be alive, and all would be hunky-dory! Another great chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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She has to know it wasn't Dion's fault. The poor lad has been to hell and is still there! Judy has to put it right for him. And Jason has to own his share of the blame, if he'd done the right thing, none of this would have happened, well, at least nothing would have happened to Dion, Bobby would still be alive, and all would be hunky-dory! Another great chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Sandra. Just trying to tie things together before the final blowout ...catastrophe ... explodes in Isabella's face. I'm still not positive how my ending will be ...happy or sad. Everyone likes happily ever after but life is seldom that clear.
Have a nice evening.... Love you, Carol