Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 20"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from LJbutterfly
You are on chapter 20, and the lies and schemes are continuing to build. Natasha is an evil teenager. I'm fearful for what could happen to her. I'm nervous about the damage Audrey could do. Plus, how long will Jason be able to duck responsibility for making a girl pregnant? You have definitely created a very twisted road.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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You are on chapter 20, and the lies and schemes are continuing to build. Natasha is an evil teenager. I'm fearful for what could happen to her. I'm nervous about the damage Audrey could do. Plus, how long will Jason be able to duck responsibility for making a girl pregnant? You have definitely created a very twisted road.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Unfortunately, Natasha is on a collision course and it's not pretty. As for Audrey, I hope she will come to her senses, but grief does strange things. As for Jason, I am afraid he will probably destroy a lot of relationship before he realizes who is. Thanks so much for reading, Lorraine. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Man oh man, do you have your fingers on the pulse of these characters or what!? There's plenty of misunderstanding to go around...and more than a little subterfuge and dysfunction. Just the way I like my stories! Filled with flawed humans like the ones I've known in my own life from time to time! (smile)
I know this is like the roller coaster going up...it's going to be one heck of a scream DOWN!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Man oh man, do you have your fingers on the pulse of these characters or what!? There's plenty of misunderstanding to go around...and more than a little subterfuge and dysfunction. Just the way I like my stories! Filled with flawed humans like the ones I've known in my own life from time to time! (smile)
I know this is like the roller coaster going up...it's going to be one heck of a scream DOWN!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Good day, my friend!
I believe you are correct.... The ones who believe they are on top of the pile and should be privileged to what they want might feel the nosedive a bit steeper on the way down. It stings once in awhile when I get to close to reality, but I believe it's worth it...I'm writing again and that's worth more than I can ever say.
Smiles, Carol
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That you are writing again ~ and so wonderfully, is therapy for ME!
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You are the whipping cream on my hot chocolate.... making everything so sweet.
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Now THAT makes my day!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Jackson has his hands full with females, doesn't he? LOL I enjoyed reading this and I really like this story. Natasha is a hot mess and Av has her head mixed up. Poor Isabella, she's just trying to do the right thing.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Jackson has his hands full with females, doesn't he? LOL I enjoyed reading this and I really like this story. Natasha is a hot mess and Av has her head mixed up. Poor Isabella, she's just trying to do the right thing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Natasha and Ava are mother like daughter...too selfish inconsiderate people who believe they should always come first. Isabella gets buried when the two of them gang up. I am afraid what lies down the road.
Smiles, Carol
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me too
Comment from prettybluebirds
Judy has to get better and clear Dion,right? Or will she stick up for Bobby. See, you have accomplished your purpose by leaving the reader wondering what next.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Judy has to get better and clear Dion,right? Or will she stick up for Bobby. See, you have accomplished your purpose by leaving the reader wondering what next.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Then I get an extra piece of chocolate, right? LOL Good morning, April.... Thank you for sharing your day with me and reviewing my newest chapter.... I must keep you guessing!
Smiles, Carol
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Yep, you earned an extra piece of chocolate.
Comment from Julie Helms
(Sigh) Natasha really is a problem. Deceitful, manipulative, and disrespectful. You have a real gift for ferreting out motivations that give depth to the story and character development. AND for making me say...where's the next installment. I need to know what happens!!
Julie :-)
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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(Sigh) Natasha really is a problem. Deceitful, manipulative, and disrespectful. You have a real gift for ferreting out motivations that give depth to the story and character development. AND for making me say...where's the next installment. I need to know what happens!!
Julie :-)
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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I'm writing... it was difficult writing about Natasha and Ava. The emotions and actions hit close to home. I thank you for reading all those chapters to catch up. I appreciate it very much.
Have a great day! Carol
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like Ava may be part of what is wrong with Natasha. I understand how teenagers can be though. If you come down too hard they might leave home and get themselves into trouble that might end their life. They seem angry with authority fingers all the time. Thankfully that stage doesn't last forever. I anxious to knw what Judy will have to say after finding out Bobby is dead.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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It sounds like Ava may be part of what is wrong with Natasha. I understand how teenagers can be though. If you come down too hard they might leave home and get themselves into trouble that might end their life. They seem angry with authority fingers all the time. Thankfully that stage doesn't last forever. I anxious to knw what Judy will have to say after finding out Bobby is dead.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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thanks for stopping by and reading this chapter, Beth. I know you understand where this story is coming from and I appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol