Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I am mad now. She never held her brother accountable for anything and now she is going to try to blame someone else for his illegal activity and failures. I get invested in what I read when it is good.
You write well. got to go. Karen
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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I am mad now. She never held her brother accountable for anything and now she is going to try to blame someone else for his illegal activity and failures. I get invested in what I read when it is good.
You write well. got to go. Karen
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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I agree! I'm trying to chalk it up to stress and pressure, but it might just be greed runs in the family. I hope not though. She could come to her senses before it's too late....
Smiles, Carol
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No spoilers. I was venting my spleen. It;s gotta be good for something.Karen:-)
Comment from royowen
It looks like they won't find any drug use by Dion, of course Judy knows that Bobby in his unique, twisted way was trying to frame dion, but Judy can clear him of misconduct, beautifully written my friend Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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It looks like they won't find any drug use by Dion, of course Judy knows that Bobby in his unique, twisted way was trying to frame dion, but Judy can clear him of misconduct, beautifully written my friend Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Roy. It's the process, but I'll be happier when Dion isn't under Jackson's scrutinizing eye. There's a whole lot of other people he should be concerned about...In time, I guess.
smiles, Carol
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That?s true, my grandson?s called Dion, a lovely boy
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He must be the twinkle in your eye!
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My elder child was deeply compassionate at four, would play with the kid no one else would, he?s the same, one can?t teach that,
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Kudos to him.... Much like you! Kindness comes from within.
smiles, Carol
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I?m proud of them, my daughter is still like that, but I think more like my wife Carol.
Comment from patcelaw
This is another very well written chapter to your book and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may God bless your weekend. Patricia .
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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This is another very well written chapter to your book and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may God bless your weekend. Patricia .
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Oh thank you so very much Patricia. You are so kind to continue reading my story and enjoying it. I appreciate it very much and the glittering stars made my day.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so disappointed in Audrey. Of course, she can't keep an open mind but she knows her brother has an awful temper and is an alcoholic, so how could she even imagine getting insurance money when Bobby was the cause of the accident and the cause of Dion being falsely accused?
I feel so sorry for Dion. I'm disappointed in Jason, too! It's good that coach was there and hopefully Judy will wake up and tell what really happened.
One suggestion for those who listen to your posts - please just use only a few asterisks as separators as the programmed "reader" reads every single asterisk.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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I'm so disappointed in Audrey. Of course, she can't keep an open mind but she knows her brother has an awful temper and is an alcoholic, so how could she even imagine getting insurance money when Bobby was the cause of the accident and the cause of Dion being falsely accused?
I feel so sorry for Dion. I'm disappointed in Jason, too! It's good that coach was there and hopefully Judy will wake up and tell what really happened.
One suggestion for those who listen to your posts - please just use only a few asterisks as separators as the programmed "reader" reads every single asterisk.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the heads up, Helen. I wasn't aware of that. Matter of fact, I didn't know people were listening to the story. I guess I'm behind times for sure. As for Audrey, she's in over her head and buried in misery.... hopefully she'll come to her senses.
Smiles, Carol
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Well, a lot of us are older with old eyes and some are even legally blind so the audio option is great. I'm trying it more to help with my neck problems.
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That sounds like a great idea for everyone, including me. I am in so much pain when I get up from the computer. Maybe I would be more relaxed if I was listening instead. How do you get to the audio?
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Carol!
Whoa! That Audrey character is just as twisted as Bobby!
Interesting set of dynamics that is progressing nicely - with the exception of Dion and the cocaine planted in his vehicle. (It was planted, yes?)
Goodness! I'm getting too involved!
Onward!
Much enjoyed!
diane
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Hello, Carol!
Whoa! That Audrey character is just as twisted as Bobby!
Interesting set of dynamics that is progressing nicely - with the exception of Dion and the cocaine planted in his vehicle. (It was planted, yes?)
Goodness! I'm getting too involved!
Onward!
Much enjoyed!
diane
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Yes, it was planted by Bobby... but Judy who lies in a coma is the only one who can prove that Bobby bought it and said he had a plan to fix Dion. Thank you so much for letting the story grip you (just not too much).
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The blood tests will prove Dion isn't guilty and the town should be aware that Jason was dating Gabby and not Dion. I am hoping this comes together quickly. Jason isn't going to be any help. He's a jerk. I do like this story.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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The blood tests will prove Dion isn't guilty and the town should be aware that Jason was dating Gabby and not Dion. I am hoping this comes together quickly. Jason isn't going to be any help. He's a jerk. I do like this story.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Barbara.... And if Judy makes it out of the coma, she should be able to tell that Bobby bought the drugs and he said he had a plan. Now, we must hope that Audrey isn't so frantic that she tries to persuade Jackson to frame Dion....
Smiles, Carol