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Comment from jenintorre
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I loved this poem Debi. I would love to know how old Ric is. He has certainly lived a very full and interesting life. I just love his reviews. I am always confident that he will give me 6 stars if he has one left. If you find out his age please let me know. Take care. Jen.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Jen, so sorry this is so late. I got so far behind but I did not forget you.
    I appreciate so much your lovely review and comments for Ric?s poem. Thank you also for the very generous six stars. I'm sure Rick will also appreciate them as well.
    Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from QC Poet
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I've been on FanStory since 2010. His name seems vaguely familiar but since then I've had 2 strokes and a multitude of health issues. If the 1957 Chevy is his it is a solvable age to figure out LOL
Thank you for Sharing this Tribute poem to your friend. Blessings to you Both

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    No, my friend, the car is just a picture I thought would look nice for the poem. And the fun with his age is something I added in for entertainment value.
    I am glad that you are doing better and back.

    I understand all too well about the health issues, as mine has been deteriorated and was crippled with no walking for ten years and barely able right now for more than a few steps. Over fifty surgeries and drs call me bionic woman, as I have so many artificial parts, all caused by forty years of lupus damaged kidneys and most of body. The only reason I mention mine is because I have have to keep looking for a bright side which I find in all you friends, and that is how I cope, even with the pain. The fact that you are back shows me you are doing the same. Good for you. We are still here, right?

    Thanks for your awesome review and comments, my friend. Debi
Comment from teafor2
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Debi: Any one reading this knows without a doubt how you feel about...
You paint him as quite popular and laud him for being a stand-up guy.
However, he's does display some vanity/macho about the age thing.
From overall indications we all would want him as a friend. Alliterations: H's, he/has; S's, so/something; T's, try/to, tall/that; W's, while/wishing/
wick, way/we'll and all End Rhymes through out the piece make the write
festive/lively...Maybe after some libations/box wine he'll drop his guard and let his age slip out:) Happy early Birth Day to your friend Ric. teafor2


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 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    I am sorry but you got this all wrong. That was just a little joke and in all due respect you must not have read the author's notes.

    This was not about vanity. This man does not have a vain bone in his body, and It was about me poking fun and this is just my style of writing, to always try to have fun.
    I do this as a thank you for those who review me as I am ill and not allowed to spend enough time reviewing and writing. So I write these to fulfill my dream to write and I have to pay my own way.

    But please for me I don't need a play by play of everything I did. Just normal words to tell how you feel would be nice and I mean that most respectfully, my friend. I know of others who feel the same way. Debi
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is such a cute poem, Debi. The ending made me laugh. You wrote some great rhymes, and told us some interesting facts about Ric. It's interesting that so many FS folks are born on the same date. Cool picture for this birthday card. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    Awe, Carol, thank you for such a lovely review and comments for Ric's poem. Also for the sweet six stars. You made my day with the fact that you said something about the ending. Thanks so much for it all, my sweet friend.
    Love, Debi
    Still praying for lots of healing blessings for you guys!
Comment from John Ciarmello
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I greatly respect this man, cherish his friendship, and honor his reviews as a fellow writer and person.

I wouldn't dare venture a guess at his age, but if you look back at his post, there are clues that may put one in the ballpark.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MY DEAR FRIEND!

Best, JohnC

Thank you again, Debi, for our reminders and, as always, your beautiful words.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    Hi John, thanks for such a kind message and comments for Ric and for his poem.
    Of course this had nothing to do with Ric making a big deal out of not telling his age. It was me who added it in for a little entertainment value. You know me, always after a laugh. LOL.
    You are too kind, my dear friend and thanks again.
    Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a cute poem that is also funny. It is for a very nice guy. I love his action, adventurous story writing, a kind reviews. Thank you Debi, for honoring Ric MyWorld's birthday.

To Ric I say,
Enjoy your day and I wish you much writing success during the coming year. Happy Birthday.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    Oh Lorraine, I do love his writing too. So thanks for such a kind message and comments for Ric and for his poem. Of course this had nothing to do with Ric making a big deal out of not telling his age.

    So I hope people don't say too much to him. It was me who added it in for a little entertainment value. You know me, always after a laugh. LOL.

    You are too kind, my very dear friend and thanks again.
    Love, Debi
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This was a fun, cheerful read that had a little teasing tone to it. It sounds like Ric is okay with whatever you wish him.
Favorite lines: He has a wish for every friend

And it is one that's pretty tall

That health and happiness won't end

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    Crystie, thanks for such a kind message and comments for Ric and for his poem.
    I hope everyone doesn't think he was making a big deal out of not telling his age. LOL, It was me who added it in for a little entertainment value. You know me, always after a laugh. LOL.

    Thanks again, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was such a creative birthday poem. I loved the last line. You're a busy woman tomorrow. Two other poems of birthday wishes. Great job, Debi. Gretchen

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
    Hi Gretchen, thanks for such a kind message and comments for Ric and for his poem.
    I hope everyone doesn't think he was making a big deal out of not telling his age. LOL, It was me who added it in for a little entertainment value. You know me, always after a laugh. LOL.

    Thanks again, my dear friend. I sure appreciate all your kind words, sweetie.
    Love, Debi
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, this is a wonderful birthday tribute that you did for Ric.
I am sure that he will be thrilled with your poem and all the Happy
Birthday wishes, not guesses, that he get today.

Your poem reads and flows well, and your message of cheer is clear.

Of special note:
He has a wish for every friend
And it is one that's pretty tall
That health and happiness won't end
This wish is kindness he shows all

(Very nice, and I am sure that all of FS wishes him the same.)

Now, there is nothing else left to say except Happy Birthday, Ric.
I hope he has a perfect day. Margaret

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
    Hey Babe, I appreciate so much your lovely review and comments for Ric?s poem..
    I'm sure Rick will also appreciate them as well.
    Thanks again, my dear SOTU. Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
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I don't ask people's age as they can be age sensitive, but not usually booker, that is unusual! Ric has always been a gentleman in my books, and very kind to me personally, this is a very good post dear Debi, you're such a very kind and godly person to those around you, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
    LOL, I would never ask someone their age either, Roy. It's just that he was kinda making it too easy to resist teasing him about it and making it part of his theme for his birthday. He kept telling me, don't ask cause I won't tell, and told me how others ask and he won't tell. His brother says he is like a woman with it. So of course, I had to get it on the fun. Hahaha!

    Thanks for the awesome comments for Ric and his poem. He is a good guy with such a sweet demeanor. I don't know him that well but I think I shall fan him. Anyway, thanks again, dear friend. Debi
reply by royowen on 16-Feb-2024
    Well done Debi.