Waking up your hidden treasures.
A call to use what God has given you.25 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
As you say, we often waste our talents and our ability to help our neighbors on excuses: we don't have time, or I'll wait for the next guy to help them.
This was a short piece, but it said so much. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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As you say, we often waste our talents and our ability to help our neighbors on excuses: we don't have time, or I'll wait for the next guy to help them.
This was a short piece, but it said so much. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and comments. Both are appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.
Excellent presentation and word imagery.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a reflective and great verse to stop and ponder the truth about God giving each of us talents. Sharing what we are and what we have is definitely one way to impact the world. Great little 5-7-5... good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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This is a reflective and great verse to stop and ponder the truth about God giving each of us talents. Sharing what we are and what we have is definitely one way to impact the world. Great little 5-7-5... good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
Comment from QC Poet
A very well constructed and conforming 5-7-5 poem with a positive message within this format
The photo seemed to be about handicapped group till I expanded it and see it's a group do yoga
Good Luck to you in this contest
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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A very well constructed and conforming 5-7-5 poem with a positive message within this format
The photo seemed to be about handicapped group till I expanded it and see it's a group do yoga
Good Luck to you in this contest
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from jim vecchio
Having worked with adults with various challenges, I firmly believe God grants us all gifts and ability to do something unique in this world. Thank you for a meaningful 5-7-5 post! Do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Having worked with adults with various challenges, I firmly believe God grants us all gifts and ability to do something unique in this world. Thank you for a meaningful 5-7-5 post! Do well in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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God Bless!
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Thank you. You too.
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Keep in touch and keep writing!
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Thank you for your comments.
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Thank you for your writing!
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You are welcome.
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Keep on writing!
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I will. Thank you.
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As long as you write, I'll try to be there.
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning and thank you for sharing your thoughts in this poem. I had left FS because of "darkness" in my family and a long talk with the Lord, deep into the night, brought me back. I believe in someway my stories are meant for others....I don't know how or why, it's just a feeling. So I write again.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Good morning and thank you for sharing your thoughts in this poem. I had left FS because of "darkness" in my family and a long talk with the Lord, deep into the night, brought me back. I believe in someway my stories are meant for others....I don't know how or why, it's just a feeling. So I write again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Good morning. Often God uses our experiences to share with others. When they read what you have written, God can use that to let them know there is hope. Thank you for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
I like your phrase "Rise ability" - there is an ability to rise and do more with all the God has given us but we hold ourselves back. A great motivational 5-7-5 poem! Best wishes in the contest!
I see you started last month - Welcome to Fanstory!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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I like your phrase "Rise ability" - there is an ability to rise and do more with all the God has given us but we hold ourselves back. A great motivational 5-7-5 poem! Best wishes in the contest!
I see you started last month - Welcome to Fanstory!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and your welcome. Both are appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all have something to offer the world in our own way and everyone has value. I enjoyed your subtle words here for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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We all have something to offer the world in our own way and everyone has value. I enjoyed your subtle words here for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mintybee
I think this poem contains an important truth. We do need to remember that we can make a difference, and that we should try to do so. You conveyed this succinctly in your 5-7-5.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I think this poem contains an important truth. We do need to remember that we can make a difference, and that we should try to do so. You conveyed this succinctly in your 5-7-5.
Mintybee
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely correct, the problems in the church really like this, I think a lot of Christian don't understand their call or their gift, so to some extent the body is a little disabled, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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You're absolutely correct, the problems in the church really like this, I think a lot of Christian don't understand their call or their gift, so to some extent the body is a little disabled, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review. You made a good point with your comment. I have never thought of it that way before. Thanks again.
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Bless you
