Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from prettybluebirds
You do manage to keep the suspense going. I'm glad you're a fast writer, or this would drive me nuts waiting for the next chapter. Excellent work, as usual.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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You do manage to keep the suspense going. I'm glad you're a fast writer, or this would drive me nuts waiting for the next chapter. Excellent work, as usual.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Thank you and good morning, April. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story and it is flowing well from my thoughts, thank heavens...but it takes so much to post so I shall do my best but I might slow down.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
I like the way you portrayed the rumor mill that always repeats the story and adds details. I'm glad the waitress knows that Dion doesn't do drugs. That's an important detail for his future. Great chapter. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I like the way you portrayed the rumor mill that always repeats the story and adds details. I'm glad the waitress knows that Dion doesn't do drugs. That's an important detail for his future. Great chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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I hoped that I didn't over do the rumor mill, but I wanted to show how fast news travels and also how many viewpoints everyone has. Yes, the waitress will definitely be someone who will vouch for Dion.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
You can't stop a sister from loving her brother. I hope Bobby isn't your brother. I hope Bobby girlfriend lives because she knew Bobby planted the drugs. Dion is the good guy while the one who caused the pregnancy is only concerned aboug his football career. I'm glad you posted another one today.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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You can't stop a sister from loving her brother. I hope Bobby isn't your brother. I hope Bobby girlfriend lives because she knew Bobby planted the drugs. Dion is the good guy while the one who caused the pregnancy is only concerned aboug his football career. I'm glad you posted another one today.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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A lot of my brother and another family member was used to compose Bobby's character. Both of them were nice guys until they drank, then turned into something evil. No deaths in car accidents but my brother died, alone because of all he'd done. I've run out of money now...so there will probably be a pause in posting till I can raise some more. Thanks for following.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is another very well written chapter, and it flows very well when it is red aloud. I enjoyed listening to it and I'm looking forward to seeing and reading more of your work. Have a good day, and may God bless. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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This is another very well written chapter, and it flows very well when it is red aloud. I enjoyed listening to it and I'm looking forward to seeing and reading more of your work. Have a good day, and may God bless. Patricia.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Patricia. It's nice to know that when you listen to it, it flows well. That will be good in guess I make it an audible on Kindle or one of those sites.
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY...
SMILES, CAROL
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We have to prove Dion had nothing to do with the drugs. Audrey is heartbroken. I have a feeling Gabby will be, also. I hope she stays where she's at. It's good for her. I really like this story.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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We have to prove Dion had nothing to do with the drugs. Audrey is heartbroken. I have a feeling Gabby will be, also. I hope she stays where she's at. It's good for her. I really like this story.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2024
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And the town's grapevine can't decide if it's Bobby's fault or Dion's. Poor Audrey walking into the middle of their gossip. What a shock! Thanks for your input. It's appreciated as always.
Smiles. Carol