Life's Twisted Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Life's Twisted Road - Chap 15"Pages turn, stories change, bonds crumble
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see the need for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see the need for improvement. I look forward to the next chapter. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you as always for your support in reviewing my story. I greatly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Oh no, they've obviously found Dion's truck andvwjo knows what else they might find, I think Dion's important to your story. I love the way you can skilfully skip scenes of Your characters without skipping a beat in your story, it's a great skill to have Carol, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Oh no, they've obviously found Dion's truck andvwjo knows what else they might find, I think Dion's important to your story. I love the way you can skilfully skip scenes of Your characters without skipping a beat in your story, it's a great skill to have Carol, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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What writer or wanna be could ask for anything more. I am thankful for you thoughts. I greatly appreciate your support,
Smiles, Carol
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Well done
Comment from Teri7
This is a great chapter full of excitement and sadness too. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is a great chapter full of excitement and sadness too. You used great descriptive words and great dialogue! I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Teri! I try to walk a fine line between telling the true story and showing too much of the ugly stuff. I am honored that you enjoyed the story and for all the glitter you have bestowed upon my efforts. Thank you so very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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you are so welcome!
Comment from patcelaw
This is another very well written chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it. It moves along. Well. Your sentence structure, and your paragraphing is absolutely absolutely wonderful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is another very well written chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it. It moves along. Well. Your sentence structure, and your paragraphing is absolutely absolutely wonderful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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How kind of you, Patricia. I am thankful for your kindness as well as the review. I am thrilled yu are enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
You've done it again, left us readers gasping and waiting for the next chapter. You seem to have a knack for that. I will certainly be watching for the newest addition to the story. Write fast.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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You've done it again, left us readers gasping and waiting for the next chapter. You seem to have a knack for that. I will certainly be watching for the newest addition to the story. Write fast.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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LOL....I am writing fast...it's the brain which moves a tad bit slow. The accident will be completely revealed in the next chapter but the.... who's fault was it?
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Great job writing this. I can't wait to find out exactly who everybody is. I am most worried about Dion.
She decided to start at their clubhouse â?" Isabella's house. (extra character)
Nat, don't lie to me. I know she stayed here this weekend." (missing beginning marks)
The sheriff answered his phone. "Jackson here. What's up?" (comma after 'phone')
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Great job writing this. I can't wait to find out exactly who everybody is. I am most worried about Dion.
She decided to start at their clubhouse â?" Isabella's house. (extra character)
Nat, don't lie to me. I know she stayed here this weekend." (missing beginning marks)
The sheriff answered his phone. "Jackson here. What's up?" (comma after 'phone')
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Got it fixed..I hope. Thank you as always for catching those errors for me. I believe everything will be revealed in the next chapter.... unless I get too winded. Just kidding! Now who will get the blame for the accident remains to be seen.
Smiles, Carol
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Carol, there you go delaying the information we're waiting on. You're a tease. lol No, just a really good writer who knows how to keep anxiously waiting for more. Those girls who are friends of Gabbys are heading for trouble.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Carol, there you go delaying the information we're waiting on. You're a tease. lol No, just a really good writer who knows how to keep anxiously waiting for more. Those girls who are friends of Gabbys are heading for trouble.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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you repeated this one, Beth. Thanks again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Carol, there you go delaying the information we're waiting on. You're a tease. lol No, just a really good writer who knows how to keep anxiously waiting for more. Those girls who are friends of Gabbys are heading for trouble.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Carol, there you go delaying the information we're waiting on. You're a tease. lol No, just a really good writer who knows how to keep anxiously waiting for more. Those girls who are friends of Gabbys are heading for trouble.
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Knowing that most don't like to read long, drawn-out chapters, I do my best to keep them within tolerance. Of course, you know me, I can't cram enough into the chapters. LOL Glad you are enjoying....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I am hanging here. Where's the next one? I am all atwitter here. Not to be a nag, but where's the next one? This isn't fair. You are sneaky. I usually like that in a person. Hey! I finally finished "My secret love".
Great work here. Karen
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I am hanging here. Where's the next one? I am all atwitter here. Not to be a nag, but where's the next one? This isn't fair. You are sneaky. I usually like that in a person. Hey! I finally finished "My secret love".
Great work here. Karen
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Funny, I just finished reading "My Secret Love." You are an evil one, my dear. Sorry for leaving you hanging...but it was a necessary evil. I'm in the throes of congering up the accident scene now and wondering just how gruesome I can get...who dies and who lives! LOL
Smiles, Carol
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I will read whenever you write it. My mailbox awaits. :-)