Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is an exciting chapter. Unfortunately, I'm caught up for now. Your story has helped me through a tough day, and I thank you for that. I will be looking forward to the next addition of the story.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

I am blessed if I was able to help you in anyway. Remember your little one will always be with you in your heart.

Hugs, Carol

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I'm going out on a limb ~~ assuming this Juan character is not a member of the local Chamber of Commerce. Bobby only does vigilante (in)-justice, and he can't add, because in his pickled brain 2+2+12.

I liked the tension built in this chapter. Gabby has the hope of some medical and emotional help and Bobby was held at bay for the moment.

Hmmm. Will he go after Dion next? Yet again he's got it wrong...but when does that ever stop him?

Very good chapter!

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

Thank you, my sweet friend....I advise you to hang on to your chair in the next few chapters.... Bobby is out of control! Now Juan..he's a clever (well, he thinks he is) businessman cleaning pools, but dishing out "candy" to the kids and anyone else that's interested on the side. He even sold pills and vapes for Becky. So I don't think he's got a seat on the local Chamber of Commerce.

Hugs, Carol

reply by karenina on 10-Feb-2024

Ah, a scoundrel so bad even Bobby wants his services! Now THIS is the Carol I know and love!

;)

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

I'm glad Gabby is safely out of Isabella's house and with Paddy and Amanda. Hopefully Bobby will not find her there. You had me on the edge of my seat with the pounding on the door. Doesn't Bobby ever quit? Exciting chapter!

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

Bobby is someone I wouldn't want to cross in real life. Though I've met one or two that were close runner ups. Hang on because the next few chapters are going to be rough ones.

Hugs, Carol

reply by Carol Clark2 on 10-Feb-2024

Thanks for the warning! :)

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Wow! This is starting to sound serious. Is he hoping to hire someone to kill someone. I hope that isn't where it is headed. I'm assuming with all that blook Gabby may have miscarried. I can't wait to find out more.

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024

I'm afraid the story is about to take a darker turn.... but that's life I guess, at least in fiction. Luckily, though I am drawing from some personal experience and tragedies, it isn't all true.
Hang on tight, Beth. Can't have you slipping and sliding off your chair. The next few chapters will be wild.

Hugs, Carol