Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Carol!
Whew!
Your chapter held my attention throughout.
That Bobby is a pig! And your description of his actions as well as his conversations attest to that fact (Bravo!)
Smooth progression of plot.
Believable and realistic action.
Very much "enjoyed."
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Hello, Carol!
Whew!
Your chapter held my attention throughout.
That Bobby is a pig! And your description of his actions as well as his conversations attest to that fact (Bravo!)
Smooth progression of plot.
Believable and realistic action.
Very much "enjoyed."
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Diane. I thank you for taking the time to read and review this chapter. Bobby is a pig! His world is a "Man's World" and he believes what Bobby wants, Bobby gets. Unfortunately, it will lead to devasting tragedy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
It is for the best, though right now she won't think so.
Gabby has been on her own, and still is. Her father is unfit, her boyfriend acts like a two year old, and she needs to get strong. Keep writing.Good work, :-) Karen
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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It is for the best, though right now she won't think so.
Gabby has been on her own, and still is. Her father is unfit, her boyfriend acts like a two year old, and she needs to get strong. Keep writing.Good work, :-) Karen
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Karen Thanks for taking the time to continue reading and I hope enjoying the story. I appreciate it so much. Have a great day!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I will keep reading. I just posted "Just Killing Time".
Comment from karenina
As if Gabby needed one more trauma in her life right now. Who knows what this bleeding means? Perhaps she's had a miscarriage, or maybe this was a result of the emotional state she's been in, and recognizing how she'd feel about losing the baby will have huge ramifications on how she chooses to go forward. Glad Dion is well. I'm seriously hoping he remains a support system for Gabby--and a "block and tackle" to keep her self-centered, accusatory, idiot boyfriend away!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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As if Gabby needed one more trauma in her life right now. Who knows what this bleeding means? Perhaps she's had a miscarriage, or maybe this was a result of the emotional state she's been in, and recognizing how she'd feel about losing the baby will have huge ramifications on how she chooses to go forward. Glad Dion is well. I'm seriously hoping he remains a support system for Gabby--and a "block and tackle" to keep her self-centered, accusatory, idiot boyfriend away!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Yes, I'm torn on how to write Gabby's perdicament. I knew I didn't want to face abortion, but a miscarriage or carrying the child is something else. It's hanging in the balance. Bobby's about to make life worse than it is so maybe it will be decided for her. Smiles and hugs while I ponder. LOL Carol
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I know what I'd do. (heh heh)
Easy for me to say, because I'm not the author!
Comment from BethShelby
I thought she just picked up information at the clinic. Did she have a miscarriage? If she did is is likely a good thing since being prergang and a father who was ready to kill someone without aking questions is causng so many problems.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I thought she just picked up information at the clinic. Did she have a miscarriage? If she did is is likely a good thing since being prergang and a father who was ready to kill someone without aking questions is causng so many problems.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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She did just pick up information... The stress has caused her to bleed...but we don't know yet if it was a miscarriage or not. Yes, with the father she has ...he's a walking time bomb.
Smiles, //carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is a wonderfully written chapter to your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your structure, your paragraphing, and everything about this work is wonderful. May you have a good day and God bless. Patric.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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This is a wonderfully written chapter to your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your structure, your paragraphing, and everything about this work is wonderful. May you have a good day and God bless. Patric.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Patric - Thank you for reading, reviewing and being so kind. I appreciate your thoughts and awesome praise.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
I'm jumping in in the middle here, but I enjoyed this chapter. You write very well and there is plenty of tension to keep ones attention! I'll try and read back through previous chapters. Julie
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I'm jumping in in the middle here, but I enjoyed this chapter. You write very well and there is plenty of tension to keep ones attention! I'll try and read back through previous chapters. Julie
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Bless you! Thank you for jumping in and if you can't find time to read the chapters that still give you $$$ let me know and I will give you a summary of what's been happening. We're just about to see the kettle boil over.....Have a great day, Julie
Smiles., Carol
Comment from royowen
It sounds very much like Gabby has miscarried, but is she out of harms way? At least that would certainly solved the problem of the baby, but I like Dion, he will do the the right thing, but he's probably got Bobby to deal with, well done Carol, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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It sounds very much like Gabby has miscarried, but is she out of harms way? At least that would certainly solved the problem of the baby, but I like Dion, he will do the the right thing, but he's probably got Bobby to deal with, well done Carol, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I'm not sure of Gabby's situation yet. Stress has played a big part in her dilemma, but the outcome is unsure. I like Dion too. Now if Bobby doesn't go crazy again....
Smiles, Carol
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My heart goes out to Gabby because I know there are young girls out there in a very similar situation. You are doing a great job writing this. I am enjoying reading.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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My heart goes out to Gabby because I know there are young girls out there in a very similar situation. You are doing a great job writing this. I am enjoying reading.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Barbara... Life is so different for today's generation. Nothing is black and white for parents or the teenagers. I appreciate your encouragement.
Smiles, Carol