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The Blunder

a 100 word story

13 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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This was a cute concept for a piece of flash fiction, and you pulled it off! I'm glad it worked out. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    I?m glad you think I pulled this cute concept off, Jessi. Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading this story. The picture is good and goes well with the story. It is well written. In catholic school. All the girls wore a plaid skirt. Very good job

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    I am delighted you enjoyed my shortie, Brenda. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Begin Again
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Some mistakes have happy endings if we're open to them. A cute and sassy story. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day!

Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    Thanks, Carol. I like your description of my story?"cute and sassy." Glad you enjoyed it.
reply by Begin Again on 07-Feb-2024
    You are welcome!