Love Letters in Her Hand
A Memory stirred20 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, this was fun although I did guess the ending at least half-way down (the oceanic blue eyes giving it away!) You're an old smoothie aren't you, Tom! Great entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Well, this was fun although I did guess the ending at least half-way down (the oceanic blue eyes giving it away!) You're an old smoothie aren't you, Tom! Great entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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If you guess it was me, you're smarter than Yogi Berra. Thank you.
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If you guess it was me, you're smarter than Yogi Berra. Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
Well if the only fiction is the color of her hair, I say the two of you are a real live love story. It is great when after all those years you are still very much in love and enjoying life to the finish. It is great story. I had that kinf of relationship too for 61 year and still have wonderful memories.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Well if the only fiction is the color of her hair, I say the two of you are a real live love story. It is great when after all those years you are still very much in love and enjoying life to the finish. It is great story. I had that kinf of relationship too for 61 year and still have wonderful memories.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Then we agree
We have been blessed
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written romantic post for the Young at Heart contest. You used great dialogue and very lovely picture of you two. What a beautiful couple! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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This is a very well written romantic post for the Young at Heart contest. You used great dialogue and very lovely picture of you two. What a beautiful couple! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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It took me 29 years to find one that would accept me and my intricacies, but I landed a good one that taught me the world did not revolve around me and me alone. And the best thing is she improved the original.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are a big softy Tom and I enjoyed your romantic story and this is perfect for the contest and your wife will be touched by your inventive story about the two of you, a joy to read and you earned my last six stars of the week, love Dolly x x x
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You are a big softy Tom and I enjoyed your romantic story and this is perfect for the contest and your wife will be touched by your inventive story about the two of you, a joy to read and you earned my last six stars of the week, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. It was a fun write casting back to when I was young and going through to when I could not remember.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You old reminiscing romantic of Shakespearian delight. Thanks for sharing your Hawaiian night with your beautiful bride. Still in love and singing her praises in poetry after all this time. You lucky devil. Thanks for sharing.
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You old reminiscing romantic of Shakespearian delight. Thanks for sharing your Hawaiian night with your beautiful bride. Still in love and singing her praises in poetry after all this time. You lucky devil. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Yes, indeed, as my profile declares, I am a romantic extraordinaire!
And if you had met her, you would have been as well, not that you aren't but not with my gal, no siree. As always, Yours East Coast Tom. Someone on FS monikered me that, and I forget who. maybe, it was you.
Comment from Begin Again
Strum the heart strings with this beautiful, sentimental and of course heart warming entry. You've written it perfectly. Good luck in the contest ... it's a winner!
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Strum the heart strings with this beautiful, sentimental and of course heart warming entry. You've written it perfectly. Good luck in the contest ... it's a winner!
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Even a
Blind squirrel finds an acorn now and then
Thank you
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Have a blessed day!
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I'll give it a go - to have a blessed day - as long as the aches stay away, but as you know that may be asking more than an older carriage will allow.
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I definitely can relate to that, Tom! But we can hope, right?
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tom,
You've managed to encapsulate the theme of young at heart perfectly in this marvelous journey into the world of memories. Excellent dialogue that has the ring of truth with the gentle tease that trust and time instill.
Pat Boone and Love Letters in the Sand, "on a day like today, we pass the time away writing love letters in the sand" or something like that. A different time, a different world.
Well done.
Best wishes to all and good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Hello Tom,
You've managed to encapsulate the theme of young at heart perfectly in this marvelous journey into the world of memories. Excellent dialogue that has the ring of truth with the gentle tease that trust and time instill.
Pat Boone and Love Letters in the Sand, "on a day like today, we pass the time away writing love letters in the sand" or something like that. A different time, a different world.
Well done.
Best wishes to all and good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your kind review
If time allows join the challenge
Comment from Yusita
This was a captivating read. A sweet little love story and a wonderful entry for the contest. I was hooked by the lovely descriptions, poetic lines, and everything else that made this such a delight to read.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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This was a captivating read. A sweet little love story and a wonderful entry for the contest. I was hooked by the lovely descriptions, poetic lines, and everything else that made this such a delight to read.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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My I enjoyed your review as much as I did writing the story
Thank you
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I'm so glad! and You're most welcome!
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a lovely story, and you have told it beautifully. I love the alliteration throughout. Your description made me feel like a voyeur, like I was standing there watching it happening!
Well done! Julie
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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This is a lovely story, and you have told it beautifully. I love the alliteration throughout. Your description made me feel like a voyeur, like I was standing there watching it happening!
Well done! Julie
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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You a voyeur ? me a retired peeping Tom
Are we related
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Haha. No, YOUR poetry made me one. I had NO choice! Lol! :-D
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Sally Law
You, sir, are one lucky, blessed man. This is so sweet and the runaway winner in this contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the vote.
Sal :))
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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You, sir, are one lucky, blessed man. This is so sweet and the runaway winner in this contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the vote.
Sal :))
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you. I hope you consider sharing a recollection in this contest I created. "Young at Heart" There was a challenge for a romance story but it had a 2000 word minimum and mine is far less than required.which
