Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I don't really know, because I've never really been there, but I've been told that time behind bars with take the edge off. Teach a hothead to tune it down a bit. Or at least better times to bolt than the past. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024

Good morning, Ric... It never worked that way for my brother. On the surface, he seemed a very nice guy, but his drinking opened an entirely different can of worms. He couldn't stay away from the booze. It left him alone when he died. Sad!

Hugs, Carol

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this with us. I am worried about Gabby now that Bobby's out. He'll hurt her. Dion - how's he doing and what about his parents?

Amanda moved closer and sat down beside Gabby. (you can omit 'down' it's understood)

Charlie chuckled, "I don't think that man's ever totally sober." (period after 'chuckled')

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024

Thanks, Barbara. I hit end preview when I meant edit. I was sweating bullets hoping I had fixed everything. Evidently I hadn't. Appreciate the review and your help.

Smiles, Carol