Oh What a Night
Just love25 total reviews
Comment from sherrygreywolf
You chose a lovely picture to illustrate your love poem. I enjoyed the read.
Word count correct and I saw nothing that needs correction. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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You chose a lovely picture to illustrate your love poem. I enjoyed the read.
Word count correct and I saw nothing that needs correction. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
A very sweet and simple poem which conforms to the requirements of a short love poem. Here's hoping they lived happily ever after. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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A very sweet and simple poem which conforms to the requirements of a short love poem. Here's hoping they lived happily ever after. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
the poem is wonderful but there is something about rhyming that makes it even better.
I love the idea of Valentine's Day because there is a feeling of happiness and joyfulness.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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the poem is wonderful but there is something about rhyming that makes it even better.
I love the idea of Valentine's Day because there is a feeling of happiness and joyfulness.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I guess there is always that element of fear, even when we think we know someone, that they just might say no, or not right now. But thankfully for you, she said yes. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Well, I guess there is always that element of fear, even when we think we know someone, that they just might say no, or not right now. But thankfully for you, she said yes. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Begin Again
Bravo! The eyes always speak the truth in matters of the heart. If they send back the same feelings, then you've been blessed. Great job!
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Bravo! The eyes always speak the truth in matters of the heart. If they send back the same feelings, then you've been blessed. Great job!
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Lisasview
Fabulous!!! You did it in 15 words or less..and it was easy to understand... Pretty clever mystery writer...
Good luck in the contest...
Lisasview..............................
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Fabulous!!! You did it in 15 words or less..and it was easy to understand... Pretty clever mystery writer...
Good luck in the contest...
Lisasview..............................
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
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Welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Liz O'Neill
To use they proverbial cliche: "Eyes are the window of the soul." hopefully he would have seen something else if it weren't there. This calls for empathic people. Whether he is empathic or not I don't know. That will help the relationship.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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To use they proverbial cliche: "Eyes are the window of the soul." hopefully he would have seen something else if it weren't there. This calls for empathic people. Whether he is empathic or not I don't know. That will help the relationship.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
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This was fun to review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image.
-You have used your 15 words
well with a good topic.
-You describe the scene and proposal very well.
-I like how you saw the love in her eyes,
and decided to "pop the question."
-I'm glad she said yes.
-Good luck in the contest.
**Note: this is on the prose side;
go to Community, Ask Us, and send
Tom a message about your poem
being on the prose side. He is the
only one who can fix it. It looks
much better that way, too.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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-Nice image.
-You have used your 15 words
well with a good topic.
-You describe the scene and proposal very well.
-I like how you saw the love in her eyes,
and decided to "pop the question."
-I'm glad she said yes.
-Good luck in the contest.
**Note: this is on the prose side;
go to Community, Ask Us, and send
Tom a message about your poem
being on the prose side. He is the
only one who can fix it. It looks
much better that way, too.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Navada
I like the way you've been able to convey a whole love story within the required 15 words. This, combined with the selection of a most appropriate visual image, tells us all we need to know. :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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I like the way you've been able to convey a whole love story within the required 15 words. This, combined with the selection of a most appropriate visual image, tells us all we need to know. :)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What more can you say about love? Your short poem sets the scene and the reader is left to imagine what sparked this new love and grew it to the point of marriage. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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What more can you say about love? Your short poem sets the scene and the reader is left to imagine what sparked this new love and grew it to the point of marriage. Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2024
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Thank you!