Life's Twisted Road
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Comment from royowen
Well it's good to know that they are both a bit banged up, but the young man was merely defending Himself, and the father of Gabby will be sleeping it off and Dion will be discharged from hospital, I wonder how his arm is, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Well it's good to know that they are both a bit banged up, but the young man was merely defending Himself, and the father of Gabby will be sleeping it off and Dion will be discharged from hospital, I wonder how his arm is, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I fear Dion's arm will be the worst of his worries. Bobby might sober up, but his anger will fester sitting in jail. Dion would be wise to steer clear of Gabby's father.
Thank you so much, Roy. Have a great day! Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I feel sorry for Gabby. Bobby doesn't sound like the kind of parent she need but she cares about him because he is her father and she looks to him for support. I assume Aunt Audrey might be able to help her.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I feel sorry for Gabby. Bobby doesn't sound like the kind of parent she need but she cares about him because he is her father and she looks to him for support. I assume Aunt Audrey might be able to help her.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Beth. Gabby needs someone by her side but I'm not sure who it will be. Audrey has her plate full even though she means well.I guess we shall see how this plays out. Natasha and Becky should be rushing in soon with their thoughts on the matter.
Smiles Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I feel sorry for Gabby. Bobby doesn't sound like the kind of parent she need but she cares about him because he is her father and she looks to him for support. I assume Aunt Audrey might be able to help her.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I feel sorry for Gabby. Bobby doesn't sound like the kind of parent she need but she cares about him because he is her father and she looks to him for support. I assume Aunt Audrey might be able to help her.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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I think I got a duplicate of your review.... But thanks again, Beth
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According to Google it is because of a loose connectiion in the router. I think they both cound. Thank my router.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Keep the stories coming. I just reissued "Mom's Lipstick", it did not get attention the first time. I was writing a lot then. Your chapters are good I want more. Karen
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Keep the stories coming. I just reissued "Mom's Lipstick", it did not get attention the first time. I was writing a lot then. Your chapters are good I want more. Karen
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Karen.... Thanks for the encouragement. I read "Mom's Lipstick" and was touched by it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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U R Welcome :-) Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I understand Gabby wants to protect her dad, but she needs to come clean with the police. He's going to hurt her when he's out of jail. Then who will protect her. I hope Audrey is good to her word and will help. I like this story.
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I understand Gabby wants to protect her dad, but she needs to come clean with the police. He's going to hurt her when he's out of jail. Then who will protect her. I hope Audrey is good to her word and will help. I like this story.
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Barbara. Thank you as always. You definitely understand that Bobby is a loose cannon and someone is going to get hurt. I just pray Audrey doesn't get wrapped up in her own problems and loses site of what's happening to Gabby.
Smiles, Carol