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Comment from sherrygreywolf
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You had me laughing out loud with this one. A wonderful example of a Silly Poem. I especially loved the lines "The lucky Bill's in pillory; I'm stuck for life with Hillary." I don't know that Ms. C would appreciate it but I thought it priceless. Great job of making me laugh.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Sherry, glad you enjoyed this and thanks for the lovely review. I knew I had to get poor Hillary in there somewhere, haha.

Comment from jenintorre
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I love this poem. It is so clever and original. The rhyme is excellent. This is a great entry for the competition. I wish you lots of luck.
Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Jen, thank you so much for this lovely review. Very glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Wonderful and funny poem about Bill Clinton and Bill Cosby hehe well done, my friend. The presentation is very nice too.


Well done

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, and glad you enjoyed it. That's a great quote by the way.

Comment from Treischel
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I thoroughly enjoyed this rollicking Political poem. The satire, humor, and play on words was delightful. Loved your image engineering. Your five quatrains cracked me up in five ways. Great creativity.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thank you for the vote of confidence! This was a challenging but fun one to write.

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Harambe,
This is a silly and sarcastic poem about Bill Clinton's sexual scandal.
It shows how lies get you into problems big and small.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thanks very much Joan! I appreciate you taking the time to read this.

    Best,

reply by dragonpoet on 08-Feb-2024
    Don?t mention it.
    Joan
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Their behavior was pathetic. Both were icons to many.
But their weiners ruined their legacy. They chose to live in the limelight, but could not endure the bright glare that came with it. Good work here. Karen

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
    Thanks very much Karen!

Comment from Terry Broxson
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It is fun how you wrote this poem, and I do love a good poke at the fallen who have been proven hypocrites. Sadly it's not fun at all. Men of power abusing women, as Donald Trump said, "because we can." Well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    Thanks very much Terry. Well said. Hopefully I'll be doing more of this sort of writing over the ongoing political season.

    -Harambe (for President)
reply by Terry Broxson on 07-Feb-2024
Comment from Sally Law
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Thank you for sharing, mystery poet. Yes, the bedsheets have been pulled back on both of the Bills. Needless to say, Hillary won't be worming her way back into anything other than talk shows. Hopefully. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    Thank you Sally! You can be sure I'll be posting more crazy stuff of this sort in the upcoming months.

    -Harambe (for President)
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao !

You have 4 votes now!

When I read : Bill s BANANA expose' I knew it was you. ( biggrin)

I went straight to your portfolio and bingo!

Three and five are my favourite stanzas..I had no idea Crosby was released despite he is guilty.

Great artwork!

PS: you won't believe this but I made an order with Amazon.it yesterday and I cursed Bezos ( concerning the delivery options ..even up to three month if you choose not to pay an extra 4.99 euros for delivery) and then I thought of you and wondered if you were still working in the cold in Winter and in the heat in Summer.

How are you faring?


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    Tempeste! Great to hear from you and thanks for the lovely review. Yeah I haven't put all my old stuff back up yet. I've been doing a lot of OTHER exciting writing in the meantime though. More about that later...

    I too had forgotten that Cosby had been released. He may be out, but still has to live with his lost reputation, and he's no spring chicken at 84. My AI artwork of him and Clinton is from arcanalabs.ai. KiwiSteve uses another good one: Night Cafe Studio. Image editing sites are becoming a dime a dozen but the trouble is finding good ones without high levels of censorship (of course my request was, by most sites).

    Does Amazon not have a Prime delivery service in Europe? It's not cheap here at $140 but I use it enough that it still (probably) pays for itself, for now. I quit working there last March. The temperature control at my facility wasn't usually an issue, except on exceptionally hot or cold days, due to the sheer size of the building and its function as a sort center with a lot of open docks. It had been good exercise for a while, but the management kiddos were starting to micromanage me in ways that interfered with that.

    A year ago I was working 70+ hour weeks. Now I work about 10 hours a week and am spending some time developing musical production skills. And instead of my writing getting censored by Fanstory, it's been censored by the parents of my 5-year-old nephew. LOL.
reply by tempeste on 09-Feb-2024
    Ciao !

    I actually had NO IDEA Crosby had been released ..

    No surprised these days lots of law offenders who are high ranking/powerful are avoiding jail . .. the world is completely upside down.

    Yes there is Prime but I don?t buy enough to make it worth having . I like to buy some dvd sometimes that I can?t find here especially old films.

    Glad you dumped Amazon ( too many hours) and that you are working on your musical skills ..

    ? are you going to create a blog?

    What music do you like and write?





Comment from jmdg1954
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This was a fun to read silly poem with this obscure words mingled in it gave me a chuckle.

I was thinking Bill Clinton and Bill Cosby when I first saw the photo. Very imaginative.

Best of luck in the contest.

John

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
    Thank you John for the kind review! Glad you enjoyed it. The AI engine I used at arcanalabs.ai deserves most of the credit. I deserve credit for finding a site that didn't give me a lecture about how my image request was inappropriate. LOL. Thanks again!