2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Take a Breath".
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-Do you remember adewpearl doing Whitney poems?
-I used to write quite a few when I first joined.
-It's nice to see it coming back.
-You did a good job with yours.
-I like the opening lines with a positive mood and tone.
-Good closing lines.
-Effective imagery and positive message.
-Well done.
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-Do you remember adewpearl doing Whitney poems?
-I used to write quite a few when I first joined.
-It's nice to see it coming back.
-You did a good job with yours.
-I like the opening lines with a positive mood and tone.
-Good closing lines.
-Effective imagery and positive message.
-Well done.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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I joined fanstory right after she left for health issues. So many poets wrote poems for her. Dean talk to me about her, she was very supportive of his work. I'm sorry I missed her. She sounds like a wonderful lady.
I read Shelley's Whitney poem and decided to try it.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy. I appreciate your reply.