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Comment from Pearl Edwards
A beautifully written and presented poem for the 'sad' poem contest.
The blank page, the broken heart, and no words that can console.
Dramatic, emotional and very true. Well done, and good luck in the contest,
cheers.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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A beautifully written and presented poem for the 'sad' poem contest.
The blank page, the broken heart, and no words that can console.
Dramatic, emotional and very true. Well done, and good luck in the contest,
cheers.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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thank you valda :-)
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was very sad indeed. Not to mention descriptive and full of angst.
How enjoyable. I bet you somebody cry. Bet you did. Ha! Good read!!!
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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This was very sad indeed. Not to mention descriptive and full of angst.
How enjoyable. I bet you somebody cry. Bet you did. Ha! Good read!!!
D
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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lol thank you douglas :-)
Comment from jim vecchio
Excellent presentation! And the words, so true. How many of the world's greatest short stories and novels of mine ended up with a blank page, maybe 2 or 3 words. like Ray Miland's character in "Lost Weekend", it's so hard to get out the words we want.
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Excellent presentation! And the words, so true. How many of the world's greatest short stories and novels of mine ended up with a blank page, maybe 2 or 3 words. like Ray Miland's character in "Lost Weekend", it's so hard to get out the words we want.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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so true! thank you jim! 😅👍💙🖋️🦄
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Thank you for your great writing!
Comment from zanya
Being 'wordless' can certainly feel as it is effectively conveyed here in this Sadness Poem for the contest; like we can never again create with those beautiful; powerful messengers we call words. Thanks for sharing,
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Being 'wordless' can certainly feel as it is effectively conveyed here in this Sadness Poem for the contest; like we can never again create with those beautiful; powerful messengers we call words. Thanks for sharing,
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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thank you zanya :-)