Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

A love poem from the perspective of an older couple -- a nice change from young love that we read so often. Note: Inseparable (check spelling, please). The picture fits your words well. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Thank you for the spelling correction Carol. :)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

How beautiful, to love someone for so long (forever) is a wonderful feeling, and yes, years might seem slow, but to share them with someone is a blessing, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Thanks so much Kim!

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Lovely and the image is spot on. Appears to meet all the criteria of the competition. Got to be close to a winner. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Thank you very much Barry!

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Such a beautiful sentiment, and such a rare one in our modern culture of divorce and youth obsession. And you have paired it with a lovely picture to illustrate it.
Best of luck in the contest! Julie

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Thank you Julie