Note to Lady Raven
A little gothic valentine33 total reviews
Comment from Navada
This is a depthful piece that reflects some of the realities of "romance" that the Hallmark cards and schmaltzy writers tend to overlook. The truth of a person is in the daily interactions and imperfections that make them (and your connection) unique.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is a depthful piece that reflects some of the realities of "romance" that the Hallmark cards and schmaltzy writers tend to overlook. The truth of a person is in the daily interactions and imperfections that make them (and your connection) unique.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love this! It's got real passion in it which shines through your honest, direct words. Even though this lady moved on, this isn't a poem about self-pity but more, in my view, a celebration of your understandable love for Lady Raven, a very sexy and vivacious lady. Well done! A virtual six from me. Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I love this! It's got real passion in it which shines through your honest, direct words. Even though this lady moved on, this isn't a poem about self-pity but more, in my view, a celebration of your understandable love for Lady Raven, a very sexy and vivacious lady. Well done! A virtual six from me. Debbie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is EXCELLENT. You drew a perfect picture of this enigmatic, mercurial woman you adored. Whereas others would find her "too much," that was what made her so appealing in your eyes.
Super excellent work here; I'm really glad I got to read this today. You're very talented.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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This is EXCELLENT. You drew a perfect picture of this enigmatic, mercurial woman you adored. Whereas others would find her "too much," that was what made her so appealing in your eyes.
Super excellent work here; I'm really glad I got to read this today. You're very talented.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Wow! Thank you incredibly for your insightful review! It's incredibly uplifting to know that you perfectly grasped the intent behind the poem.
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Well, but that's because you did such a great job with your descriptions. I'm very impressed with your abilities. You're masterful with words.
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is how every woman wants to be loved, methinks -- what a romantic and beautiful poem. I don't have anything more to say than this--
I loved your verse,
I loved your style,
I loved to read it -
made me smile.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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This is how every woman wants to be loved, methinks -- what a romantic and beautiful poem. I don't have anything more to say than this--
I loved your verse,
I loved your style,
I loved to read it -
made me smile.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Douglas Goff
What an interesting poem. It lends itself to more questions than it answers. Like who was this magnificent Lady Raven? And why did she go? Wanderlust?
Very nicely done. Poetry really should leave the reader thinking upon its meaning.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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What an interesting poem. It lends itself to more questions than it answers. Like who was this magnificent Lady Raven? And why did she go? Wanderlust?
Very nicely done. Poetry really should leave the reader thinking upon its meaning.
D
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Very creatively composed about someone who loved a free spirit who could not be tamed or controlled. he loved her with all her faults as well as special attributes - but it was never enough. Beautifully and thoughtfully done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Very creatively composed about someone who loved a free spirit who could not be tamed or controlled. he loved her with all her faults as well as special attributes - but it was never enough. Beautifully and thoughtfully done.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Lisasview
I enjoyed your song as I sang through it. Wondering what the sound will be like..the only thing that I am not feeling you need is all the I's..I this and I that..could start a line with just Loved...for example...
First read of yours...
Lisaview from California, now living in Spain full time.....
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed your song as I sang through it. Wondering what the sound will be like..the only thing that I am not feeling you need is all the I's..I this and I that..could start a line with just Loved...for example...
First read of yours...
Lisaview from California, now living in Spain full time.....
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. I think you make a valid point about the use of "I." Thank you!
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Such an easy fix. Hope to take the time to go over your work and do the fixes...
Lisasview
Comment from Janet Foor
An endearing poem that reminds us of where most of us have been. A toxic relationship has run its course and we have hopefully learned from the experience.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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An endearing poem that reminds us of where most of us have been. A toxic relationship has run its course and we have hopefully learned from the experience.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I think most of us have has a similar experience with a loved one at some point in our lives. We loved them but knew it wouldn't last. That person was too much of a free spirit and that's what made them who they were. They needed to be that person. This is a great poem. I wish I had a six left.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I think most of us have has a similar experience with a loved one at some point in our lives. We loved them but knew it wouldn't last. That person was too much of a free spirit and that's what made them who they were. They needed to be that person. This is a great poem. I wish I had a six left.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, spooky Halloween or lovely Valentine? I am still debating between those two, but I really it, it sounds romantic but also gothic. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Wow, spooky Halloween or lovely Valentine? I am still debating between those two, but I really it, it sounds romantic but also gothic. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback means a lot to me, and I'm truly grateful for your kind words. Thank you!
