Birthdays
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-A very nice tribute for Miss Merri's birhday.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Many good examples of her talents
and mixing "all of her arts." It's always
good to have more than one as long
as the talent is there.
-I like the concluding verse with "writing buffet"
and wish Miss Merri a very Happy Birthday!
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-A very nice tribute for Miss Merri's birhday.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Many good examples of her talents
and mixing "all of her arts." It's always
good to have more than one as long
as the talent is there.
-I like the concluding verse with "writing buffet"
and wish Miss Merri a very Happy Birthday!
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thanks for the kind words for my poem, Pam. I appreciate it so much.
I know when she sees it she will enjoy all the wonderful wishes that everyone is leaving for her. Thanks again, my dear friend.
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You are very welcome, Debi. I think she will enjoy the poem and comments, too.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debi,
the Queen of birthday tributes... the giver of sweet rhyme while allowing us all to know this wonderful person that little bit extra on a more personal level. I love that, and I know so many others that feel the very same way. You bring us all that little bit closer through the opening of hearts.
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday Miss Merri... may this pleasing melody reach its desired destination with the love that created it.
A stunning presentation Debi... everyone should allow music into their lives in whatever form, or genre that may be.
Beautiful-beautiful-beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
conscious connections.
Warm regards,
James.
******Star Exceptional!!!!!!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hi Debi,
the Queen of birthday tributes... the giver of sweet rhyme while allowing us all to know this wonderful person that little bit extra on a more personal level. I love that, and I know so many others that feel the very same way. You bring us all that little bit closer through the opening of hearts.
Wishing you a very Happy Birthday Miss Merri... may this pleasing melody reach its desired destination with the love that created it.
A stunning presentation Debi... everyone should allow music into their lives in whatever form, or genre that may be.
Beautiful-beautiful-beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
conscious connections.
Warm regards,
James.
******Star Exceptional!!!!!!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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James, what I love about your reviews is that you don't just compliment the poem, but the poet. And this poet truly loves to hear your thoughtful words. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Thanks also for the kind comments for my poem. I appreciate it so much.
I know when Adonna sees it she will enjoy all the wonderful wishes that everyone is leaving for her. Thanks again, my dear friend.
Comment from Christine Currie
I was very touched by your tribute to someone you hold very close. It is nice to know that there are people in forums like FanStory who develop deep and meaningful relationships. It sounds like you have been good friends for a very long time. If I may be so bold, I'll take this opportunity to extend my own 'Best Wishes' to Miss Merri. Thank you for sharing!
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I was very touched by your tribute to someone you hold very close. It is nice to know that there are people in forums like FanStory who develop deep and meaningful relationships. It sounds like you have been good friends for a very long time. If I may be so bold, I'll take this opportunity to extend my own 'Best Wishes' to Miss Merri. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
Comment from NanaGaye
Once again beautiful rhyming poem, you are a great poet. Great choice of picture and script. What more can I say, keep writing and creating. Must get on to my writing my grandmother's story. I've done the first chapter, do you think I should post it?
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Once again beautiful rhyming poem, you are a great poet. Great choice of picture and script. What more can I say, keep writing and creating. Must get on to my writing my grandmother's story. I've done the first chapter, do you think I should post it?
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You never fail to give a birthday "card," that gives us gives us more information about your subject. Here you give a lovely tribute to a very deserving and wonderful woman and talented poet.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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You never fail to give a birthday "card," that gives us gives us more information about your subject. Here you give a lovely tribute to a very deserving and wonderful woman and talented poet.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Mary, I thank you for your lovely comments for Adonna's poem. I hope she enjoys it too. As far as I know she hasn't seen it yet. I hope that means she did something special with her family. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A beautiful birthday poem, sweet lady! You've honored a wonderful person and writer. You've brought in her many talents. Music, art and poetry. She's a staple on this site, but I didn't realize she was so accomplished in the different art.
Thanks for sharing her with us.
Much love,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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A beautiful birthday poem, sweet lady! You've honored a wonderful person and writer. You've brought in her many talents. Music, art and poetry. She's a staple on this site, but I didn't realize she was so accomplished in the different art.
Thanks for sharing her with us.
Much love,
Rhonda
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Rhonda, I thank you for your lovely comments for Adonna's poem. I hope she enjoys it too. As far as I know she hasn't seen it yet. I hope that means she did something special with her family. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
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I hope she's seen it now!!! I also hope she had fun with the family!!
Love you,
Rhonda
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I know she has seen it but haven't heard from her yet.
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Hmmmmm. Is she having health problems?
Comment from Navada
You've done it again! I do like the way you're able to capture the essential elements of what makes our fellow writers tick and then celebrate them on the occasion of their birthday. :)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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You've done it again! I do like the way you're able to capture the essential elements of what makes our fellow writers tick and then celebrate them on the occasion of their birthday. :)
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Navada, I thank you for your lovely comments for Adonna's poem. I hope she enjoys it too. As far as I know she hasn't seen it yet. I hope that means she did something special with her family. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I love Miss Merri's work of art in her writing. My question for you is how do you know when the birthdays occur: I have to congratulate you for writing each of these lovely poems. This poem is fantastic.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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I love Miss Merri's work of art in her writing. My question for you is how do you know when the birthdays occur: I have to congratulate you for writing each of these lovely poems. This poem is fantastic.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hi Rosemary, I just checked in my book and for some reason I do not have your birthdate. I would love to do one for you if you could share that with me?
I thank you for your lovely comments for Adonna's poem. I hope she enjoys it too. As far as I know she hasn't seen it yet. I hope that means she did something special with her family. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely birthday poem for MM. I love her poetry and it was nice to hear a little more about the woman behind MM. Another lovely birthday tribute Debi. I hope she enjoyed her special day.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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This is a lovely birthday poem for MM. I love her poetry and it was nice to hear a little more about the woman behind MM. Another lovely birthday tribute Debi. I hope she enjoyed her special day.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hi Valda, I thank you for your lovely comments for Adonna's poem. I hope she enjoys it too. As far as I know she hasn't seen it yet. I hope that means she did something special with her family. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from karenina
A fine tribute to a woman who is much respected, as she should be, for her eloquent and elegant poetry! I am certain this birthday must be bittersweet for her, and I send prayers for her beloved husband who is so very ill, and for her as well.
Congratulations on a beautiful poem, Debi.
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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A fine tribute to a woman who is much respected, as she should be, for her eloquent and elegant poetry! I am certain this birthday must be bittersweet for her, and I send prayers for her beloved husband who is so very ill, and for her as well.
Congratulations on a beautiful poem, Debi.
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Hi Karenina, I thank you for your lovely comments for Adonna's poem. I hope she enjoys it too. As far as I know she hasn't seen it yet. I hope that means she did something special with her family. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
Love, Debi
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I'm sure she is spending time with her husband...
