Guided by Faith
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have always liked your story, so I have no complaints. The characters in the story are very laid back but also, they like their privacy. For me to say otherwise and be disappointed would be a total surprise.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I have always liked your story, so I have no complaints. The characters in the story are very laid back but also, they like their privacy. For me to say otherwise and be disappointed would be a total surprise.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that they finally talked and Seth was able to express his respect for Emma's wishes to save sex for marriage. He is a man of honor. I liked that Seth was able to get good advice from Jake. And it says a lot that he didn't take Abbey's call when he had this important talk with Emma.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I'm glad that they finally talked and Seth was able to express his respect for Emma's wishes to save sex for marriage. He is a man of honor. I liked that Seth was able to get good advice from Jake. And it says a lot that he didn't take Abbey's call when he had this important talk with Emma.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I am glad you picked up on him not taking Abbey's call. I was hoping somebody would.
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It shows he made his priorities to focus on Emma! 😊💞
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Yes, it does, that why I included it.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like that they are talking about the confusing feelings and how they don't want to rush and screw things up. You left a nugget of worry about her father so now we waut. Hope it's not bad. This was a great chapter. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I like that they are talking about the confusing feelings and how they don't want to rush and screw things up. You left a nugget of worry about her father so now we waut. Hope it's not bad. This was a great chapter. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Daylily
I continue liking and enjoying this story very much, Barbara. I especially appreciate the spiritual background. It is a strong posting offering good relationships-- both the established ones and developing ones. I always look forward to reading a new chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I continue liking and enjoying this story very much, Barbara. I especially appreciate the spiritual background. It is a strong posting offering good relationships-- both the established ones and developing ones. I always look forward to reading a new chapter. :-)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent detail on how they spent the day and enough detail to put us in the scene. The other characters keep things lively. It is good to see that these two respect each other and can sit down and discuss a tough topic even though they are both embarrassed to address it.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Excellent detail on how they spent the day and enough detail to put us in the scene. The other characters keep things lively. It is good to see that these two respect each other and can sit down and discuss a tough topic even though they are both embarrassed to address it.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
This is another great chapter you have penned. I wish somehow you would make a sequel to it of them getting married and having a family. I enjoy reading about Seth and Emma. I can always dream dear friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is another great chapter you have penned. I wish somehow you would make a sequel to it of them getting married and having a family. I enjoy reading about Seth and Emma. I can always dream dear friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I might. I've never done a sequel but have thought about. I will end this one with the proposal.
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how ever you end it will be great! I truly look forward to reading your work!
Comment from Ric Myworld
In today's world with all the added pressures and temptations, I don't know how possible it might be for a young lady or gentleman to save themselves for marriage. The lack of teaching and morals has young people thinking it's okay to have as many partners as they'd like, but abstinence waiting for monogamy is a nice thought just the same.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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In today's world with all the added pressures and temptations, I don't know how possible it might be for a young lady or gentleman to save themselves for marriage. The lack of teaching and morals has young people thinking it's okay to have as many partners as they'd like, but abstinence waiting for monogamy is a nice thought just the same.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Seth parents died and his grandparents raised him, and Emma's parents are old fashioned and extremely religious. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Another chapter in this moving story. I'm truly enjoying this - as I enjoy all of your work. You do a wonderful job of using dialogue to move the story forward - I don't think you need to worry about how long the post is when it reads as well as your work does.
Some suggestions,
'Emma moved in (front of him) - maybe 'before him,' their eyes met, and she threw her arms around his neck.
'He donated the gift cards for the winners of...' Eliminate the 'the' before gift cards.
'"Are you all right?"' Are you alright?
Hope my suggestions help - Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi there,
Another chapter in this moving story. I'm truly enjoying this - as I enjoy all of your work. You do a wonderful job of using dialogue to move the story forward - I don't think you need to worry about how long the post is when it reads as well as your work does.
Some suggestions,
'Emma moved in (front of him) - maybe 'before him,' their eyes met, and she threw her arms around his neck.
'He donated the gift cards for the winners of...' Eliminate the 'the' before gift cards.
'"Are you all right?"' Are you alright?
Hope my suggestions help - Thank you for sharing,
~MP~
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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I just changed alright to all right because of a previous review. Before I did, I checked my grammar books and in this situation all right is correct. I did make the other changes. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I was a little surprised that Emma knew the kneeing technique. I like the respect Emma and Seth have for each other. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely. I was a little surprised that Emma knew the kneeing technique. I like the respect Emma and Seth have for each other. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
What a great story full of intriguing lies in scenes going on behind the scenes very cool to read your characters too are so vibrant they seem real to me they have meat they have personality and they're dealing with things that could very well be today and I'm sure are. I think your work is grammatically perfect and interesting to read and keeps me engaged every time I read it so really wonderful job. Best of luck I hope you publish!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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What a great story full of intriguing lies in scenes going on behind the scenes very cool to read your characters too are so vibrant they seem real to me they have meat they have personality and they're dealing with things that could very well be today and I'm sure are. I think your work is grammatically perfect and interesting to read and keeps me engaged every time I read it so really wonderful job. Best of luck I hope you publish!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
