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Book Four Wolf Bend Series
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Julie Helms
Excellent chapter, engaging dialogue, drunk sex...It ticks all the boxes for a good story! :-)
My favorite line: half a bear is better than a whole turtle! Really funny!
You missed a few quote marks:
coffee. So David Harkens requested me. The FBI's involved? Isn't that Watson's jurisdiction?"
And
if I didn't. And here I am.
Enjoyed this! Julie.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
Thanks, Julie! I appreciate those catches and appreciate you!
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